暮色沉沉,天空被细雨打湿。车站旁的快餐店,透着暖橘的灯光。店内客人三三两两,玻璃橱窗上凝结一层薄薄水雾,聚集成滴。我坐在桌边,埋头吃饭。
  “吱呀”一声,吹进一阵冷风。我一抬头,玻璃门被推开了。一个老头收好伞,在门口地毯处反复蹭着脚上的泥水。老头六七十岁,戴顶布帽,黑色的袄褂被洗成了灰蓝。几个大布包压着他佝偻的背,空荡荡的裤管里支出两根干瘦的脚杆,一双黑脚套在塑料凉鞋里。
  老头进门,并不直奔柜台,而是找了个没人的角落,默默地坐下。或许是来避雨的,我这样想着,便不再理睬。这时耳边传来一阵低低絮语,我淡淡地斜瞥了一眼。不知几时,老头竟站到了我身边。他花白的头发胡子,胡乱地糊了一脸。脸上像黄土高原一样,沟壑纵横。嘴巴一开一合,念念有词。倒霉!我心里闪过一丝厌恶——又碰上了乞丐。我收回目光,转过头,扔下一句硬邦邦的话:“我一分钱都没有了。”
  我遇到的乞丐实在太多了,可到后来,发现他们全是假的,骗人骗得真真切切。记得曾有个长得慈祥的老太太拉住我,称自己的车票钱被扒手偷走了,求我给几块钱帮她回家,我慷慨解囊。不料,接连几天我都碰到了那个老太太,还是那个打扮,还是那个理由……
  拉回思绪,却见老头正和服务员说着什么。他弓着腰,不断地点着头,一脸的笑容,脸上的沟壑更深。“不是不给,是你不能在这吃……”老头卖力点头赔笑。这时我前面的一位女孩起身离开,玻璃门刚合上,老头竟然端起女孩的剩饭,狼吞虎咽起来。静静地看着眼前的这一幕,我觉得脸越来越热。饭吃到嘴里,像是掺了沙,咯得牙疼。
  曾听人说,乞丐是社会的毒瘤。前有东莞丐帮恶行揭秘,后有三里屯买花老人事件,乞丐这个特殊群体,早让我们失去了信任和同情。冷脸相对,也渐渐成了习惯。看着老人扒拉着快餐盒里最后几粒米饭,我感慨万千。乞丐是瘤,可也是长在城市上的肉啊!
  包里还有一个面包,我鼓起勇气,扯扯老人的衣袖。“爷爷,给您!”说完,飞快地把面包塞进了他怀里。“吱呀”一声,我推开门,逃也似的离开了餐厅。这时背后又传来低低的絮语,脑海中我仿佛看到老人嘴巴一开一合,俨然一尊佛,吐着唤醒良心的梵音。
  点   评
  1.挖掘深入,材料出新。以乞丐为题材的作文,比较常见,甚至有些陈旧,但出人意料的是,在看似寻常的材料中,考生却写出了新意。无论是情节的巧妙安排,还是“乞丐是瘤,可也是长在城市上的肉”之类的议论,或是“俨然一尊佛,吐着唤醒良心的梵音”之类的感触,均有震撼人心的效果。也正是这些匠心独运的构思,让材料有了不一样的光彩。
  2.事件不大,情节曲折。这样的故事,在生活中可谓司空见惯,可考生调动思维的大笔,在情节安排上大做文章。下笔在景物描写中引出,继而在讨厌的情感中展开,最后在一个出人意料的画面中引出高潮并自然收束,情节逼真,让人有宛如亲历之感。" />

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2019年10月20日 08:22

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【天】【空】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【广】【阔】【的】【蔚】【蓝】【;】【鲜】【花】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【沁】【人】【的】【芳】【香】【;】【春】【风】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【温】【柔】【的】【轻】【抚】【;】【妈】【妈】【带】【给】【我】【的】【幸】【福】【,】【是】【那】【轻】【轻】【的】【、】【甜】【甜】【的】【吻】【。】【这】【吻】【比】【蓝】【天】【更】【广】【阔】【、】【比】【鲜】【花】【更】【芳】【香】【、】【比】【春】【风】【更】【温】【柔】【,】【这】【吻】【里】【充】【满】【着】【妈】【妈】【对】【我】【的】【爱】【与】【希】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【时】【候】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【是】【温】【暖】【的】【太】【阳】【。】【记】【得】【那】【是】【一】【个】【雨】【天】【,】【雷】【声】【阵】【阵】【,】【大】【雨】【瓢】【泼】【。】【我】【背】【着】【书】【包】【,】【焦】【急】【地】【在】【校】【门】【口】【向】【外】【张】【望】【。】【雨】【幕】【中】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【身】【影】【出】【现】【了】【,】【只】【见】【她】【拿】【着】【我】【的】【小】【花】【伞】【,】【边】【走】【边】【找】【寻】【,】【当】【她】【发】【现】【我】【后】【,】【快】【步】【小】【跑】【到】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【,】【赶】【忙】【脱】【下】【外】【套】【披】【在】【我】【身】【上】【,】【然】【后】【拉】【着】【我】【的】【手】【走】【进】【雨】【中】【。】【她】【为】【了】【不】【让】【我】【淋】【湿】【,】【把】【大】【半】【的】【伞】【都】【斜】【向】【我】【这】【边】【。】【到】【了】【家】【,】【乌】【云】【散】【去】【,】【雨】【也】【停】【了】【,】【七】【色】【的】【彩】【虹】【出】【现】【在】【天】【边】【,】【可】【妈】【妈】【的】【大】【半】【个】【身】【体】【却】【被】【雨】【淋】【透】【了】【。】【我】【心】【疼】【地】【替】【妈】【妈】【往】【下】【扒】【衣】【服】【,】【一】【个】【劲】【地】【说】【对】【不】【起】【,】【可】【妈】【妈】【却】【笑】【了】【,】【还】【在】【我】【的】【脸】【颊】【上】【轻】【轻】【地】【留】【下】【了】【一】【个】【吻】【。】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【啊】【是】【那】【么】【的】【暖】【,】【像】【温】【暖】【的】【太】【阳】【,】【温】【暖】【了】【我】【的】【全】【身】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【长】【大】【后】【,】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【是】【温】【柔】【的】【月】【亮】【。】【记】【得】【那】【是】【一】【个】【深】【夜】【,】【我】【为】【解】【一】【道】【难】【题】【焦】【躁】【不】【安】【,】【头】【昏】【脑】【胀】【,】【而】【此】【刻】【,】【时】【钟】【却】【不】【合】【时】【宜】【地】【“】【当】【当】【”】【敲】【响】【了】【几】【下】【,】【我】【气】【急】【败】【坏】【地】【扔】【下】【笔】【,】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【,】【这】【时】【,】【妈】【妈】【来】【到】【我】【的】【身】【旁】【,】【为】【我】【递】【上】【一】【杯】【热】【奶】【,】【拍】【了】【拍】【我】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【然】【后】【在】【我】【身】【边】【默】【默】【地】【坐】【下】【。】【喝】【了】【妈】【妈】【的】【这】【杯】【热】【奶】【,】【我】【的】【脑】【细】【胞】【又】【重】【新】【活】【跃】【了】【,】【没】【过】【多】【长】【时】【间】【,】【我】【就】【得】【出】【了】【答】【案】【。】【看】【到】【我】【终】【于】【又】【战】【胜】【了】【一】【道】【难】【题】【,】【妈】【妈】【也】【替】【我】【高】【兴】【,】【她】【二】【话】【没】【说】【,】【在】【我】【的】【脸】【上】【深】【深】【地】【印】【上】【了】【一】【吻】【,】【这】【吻】【是】【那】【么】【的】【柔】【软】【,】【像】【温】【柔】【的】【月】【亮】【,】【使】【我】【浑】【身】【的】【疲】【倦】【一】【扫】【而】【光】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【的】【吻】【,】【比】【蜜】【还】【要】【甜】【,】【比】【花】【还】【要】【香】【,】【是】【妈】【妈】【送】【我】【的】【最】【好】【礼】【物】【。】【可】【女】【儿】【现】【在】【没】【有】【什】【么】【送】【给】【您】【,】【只】【能】【还】【您】【一】【个】【纯】【洁】【的】【吻】【,】【让】【您】【感】【受】【到】【女】【儿】【对】【您】【的】【爱】【,】【希】【望】【您】【永】【远】【平】【安】【、】【健】【康】【、】【长】【寿】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【陈】【稳】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【幕】【降】【临】【,】【四】【下】【里】【一】【片】【漆】【黑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【躺】【在】【床】【上】【,】【心】【中】【却】【没】【有】【片】【刻】【宁】【静】【。】【我】【不】【停】【地】【问】【自】【己】【:】【“】【爸】【爸】【为】【什】【么】【到】【现】【在】【还】【不】【回】【来】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【咚】【咚】【,】【啪】【”】【,】【爸】【爸】【终】【于】【拖】【着】【那】【疲】【惫】【的】【身】【子】【回】【来】【了】【。】【照】【理】【说】【,】【我】【应】【该】【安】【心】【才】【对】【。】【但】【是】【我】【意】【识】【到】【真】【正】【的】【战】【争】【即】【将】【开】【始】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【星】【期】【前】【,】【爸】【爸】【的】【一】【句】【话】【成】【了】【这】【场】【战】【争】【的】【导】【火】【线】【。】【饭】【桌】【上】【爸】【爸】【四】【下】【瞧】【了】【瞧】【,】【见】【没】【什】【么】【好】【菜】【,】【便】【扒】【了】【一】【大】【口】【饭】【在】【嘴】【里】【,】【然】【后】【就】【甩】【出】【这】【样】【一】【句】【不】【经】【意】【的】【话】【:】【“】【唉】【,】【这】【饭】【怎】【么】【这】【么】【难】【吃】【啊】【!】【”】【妈】【妈】【的】【脸】【顿】【时】【沉】【了】【下】【来】【,】【拽】【过】【饭】【盆】【,】【一】【边】【用】【力】【地】【翻】【腾】【一】【边】【没】【好】【腔】【地】【说】【:】【“】【不】【好】【吃】【,】【你】【就】【别】【吃】【啊】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【似】【乎】【没】【听】【见】【,】【依】【旧】【大】【口】【地】【吃】【饭】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【妈】【妈】【并】【没】【有】【罢】【休】【,】【一】【个】【星】【期】【不】【肯】【上】【桌】【吃】【饭】【,】【还】【时】【不】【时】【地】【找】【爸】【爸】【的】【碴】【儿】【,】【面】【对】【着】【无】【理】【取】【闹】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【爸】【爸】【的】【忍】【耐】【似】【乎】【达】【到】【了】【极】【限】【,】【最】【后】【摔】【门】【而】【去】【。】【我】【想】【,】【妈】【妈】【这】【个】【“】【法】【西】【斯】【专】【政】【者】【”】【一】【定】【会】【挑】【起】【我】【们】【家】【的】【第】【二】【次】【世】【界】【大】【战】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【于】【是】【,】【我】【潜】【伏】【到】【门】【旁】【,】【观】【察】【这】【支】【军】【队】【的】【动】【向】【。】【可】【是】【好】【久】【都】【没】【有】【声】【音】【传】【来】【,】【这】【异】【常】【的】【宁】【静】【更】【加】【使】【我】【感】【到】【惊】【奇】【与】【不】【安】【。】【正】【当】【我】【诧】【异】【时】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【窗】【外】【的】【风】【突】【然】【停】【了】【。】【我】【的】【心】【不】【禁】【一】【颤】【,】【因】【为】【暴】【风】【雨】【马】【上】【就】【要】【来】【了】【。】【果】【然】【,】【一】【会】【儿】【屋】【子】【里】【就】【传】【来】【了】【妈】【妈】【歇】【斯】【底】【里】【的】【怒】【吼】【:】【“】【你】【给】【我】【滚】【出】【去】【!】【”】【还】【夹】【杂】【着】【爸】【爸】【毫】【不】【服】【输】【的】【话】【:】【“】【你】【想】【过】【不】【,】【不】【想】【过】【就】【散】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【的】【风】【越】【来】【越】【猛】【烈】【了】【,】【似】【乎】【要】【吞】【噬】【掉】【所】【有】【的】【一】【切】【。】【我】【越】【来】【越】【害】【怕】【,】【我】【怕】【从】【此】【失】【去】【幸】【福】【,】【我】【怕】【从】【此】【失】【去】【这】【个】【家】【。】【“】【散】【就】【散】【!】【”】【说】【着】【,】【妈】【妈】【便】【开】【始】【砸】【东】【西】【了】【,】【接】【着】【传】【来】【了】【一】【阵】【杂】【乱】【的】【声】【响】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【的】【风】【雨】【愈】【加】【猛】【烈】【了】【,】【树】【叶】【连】【同】【树】【枝】【一】【起】【折】【断】【消】【失】【。】【我】【也】【越】【来】【越】【恐】【慌】【,】【我】【怕】【妈】【妈】【真】【的】【不】【想】【过】【了】【,】【而】【我】【就】【会】【失】【去】【一】【个】【完】【整】【的】【家】【啊】【!】【于】【是】【我】【毅】【然】【推】【开】【门】【冲】【了】【进】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【面】【对】【着】【满】【地】【的】【玻】【璃】【碎】【片】【和】【散】【落】【的】【包】【米】【种】【,】【我】【的】【心】【似】【乎】【在】【滴】【血】【。】【我】【不】【想】【失】【去】【什】【么】【,】【我】【也】【不】【知】【道】【该】【怎】【么】【做】【。】【我】【下】【意】【识】【地】【跪】【在】【了】【他】【们】【的】【面】【前】【,】【因】【为】【我】【知】【道】【,】【父】【母】【都】【需】【要】【冷】【静】【。】【面】【对】【着】【他】【们】【怒】【气】【横】【生】【的】【脸】【,】【我】【的】【泪】【水】【再】【也】【止】【不】【住】【了】【。】【我】【苦】【苦】【地】【哀】【求】【他】【们】【别】【再】【吵】【了】【,】【豆】【大】【的】【泪】【珠】【从】【我】【的】【脸】【颊】【滑】【落】【下】【来】【。】【父】【母】【被】【我】【的】【举】【动】【惊】【呆】【了】【,】【一】【脸】【愕】【然】【,】【待】【在】【那】【里】【好】【久】【都】【没】【有】【动】【。】【渐】【渐】【地】【,】【我】【看】【到】【他】【们】【的】【眼】【睛】【湿】【润】【了】【,】【也】【似】【乎】【懂】【得】【了】【什】【么】【,】【他】【们】【相】【互】【望】【了】【一】【眼】【,】【那】【目】【光】【充】【满】【了】【自】【责】【与】【懊】【恼】【。】【随】【后】【,】【他】【们】【又】【将】【目】【光】【转】【向】【了】【我】【,】【原】【本】【怒】【气】【横】【生】【的】【脸】【上】【又】【添】【了】【几】【分】【欣】【慰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【停】【了】【,】【雨】【歇】【了】【,】【一】【切】【又】【恢】【复】【了】【平】【静】【。】【那】【一】【晚】【,】【父】【母】【没】【有】【再】【吵】【,】【我】【们】【一】【家】【三】【口】【挤】【在】【一】【张】【床】【上】【睡】【得】【好】【暖】【好】【暖】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【巧】【于】【选】【材】【,】【把】【自】【己】【家】【父】【母】【因】【矛】【盾】【而】【引】【发】【的】【战】【争】【与】【窗】【外】【的】【自】【然】【环】【境】【结】【合】【起】【来】【,】【叙】【述】【细】【致】【具】【体】【。】【由】【于】【自】【己】【的】【努】【力】【,】【化】【“】【风】【雨】【声】【”】【为】【平】【静】【—】【—】【风】【停】【了】【,】【雨】【歇】【了】【。】【这】【是】【世】【界】【上】【每】【个】【家】【庭】【都】【向】【往】【的】【。】【相】【信】【我】【们】【中】【学】【生】【和】【他】【们】【的】【父】【母】【会】【从】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【中】【得】【到】【启】【示】【。】疾病专题【<】【i】【m】【g】【 】【s】【r】【c】【=】【"】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【i】【m】【g】【1】【.】【q】【i】【k】【a】【n】【.】【c】【o】【m】【.】【c】【n】【/】【q】【k】【i】【m】【a】【g】【e】【s】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【2】【6】【-】【1】【-】【l】【.】【j】【p】【g】【"】【 】【a】【l】【t】【=】【"】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【i】【m】【g】【1】【.】【q】【i】【k】【a】【n】【.】【c】【o】【m】【.】【c】【n】【/】【q】【k】【i】【m】【a】【g】【e】【s】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【2】【6】【-】【1】【-】【l】【.】【j】【p】【g】【"】【 】【/】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【没】【有】【想】【到】【,】【离】【开】【初】【中】【校】【园】【都】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【还】【时】【常】【会】【想】【起】【她】【。】【正】【方】【形】【的】【脸】【,】【马】【尾】【辫】【,】【个】【子】【不】【高】【,】【下】【巴】【却】【扬】【得】【挺】【高】【,】【不】【说】【话】【时】【也】【有】【自】【信】【和】【戏】【谑】【的】【神】【情】【。】【那】【样】【的】【画】【面】【,】【竟】【是】【如】【此】【清】【晰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【初】【次】【相】【见】【,】【她】【反】【复】【强】【调】【:】【“】【我】【姓】【向】【,】【向】【老】【师】【!】【一】【定】【要】【记】【着】【,】【别】【隔】【着】【老】【远】【叫】【我】【生】【物】【老】【师】【、】【生】【物】【老】【师】【!】【”】【见】【下】【面】【一】【阵】【骚】【动】【,】【她】【莞】【尔】【一】【笑】【,】【继】【续】【道】【来】【,】【“】【你】【们】【是】【不】【知】【道】【呢】【,】【原】【来】【这】【门】【课】【叫】【植】【物】【学】【,】【于】【是】【我】【便】【成】【了】【植】【物】【老】【师】【;】【后】【来】【又】【叫】【动】【物】【学】【,】【我】【又】【成】【了】【动】【物】【老】【师】【,】【现】【在】【好】【一】【点】【儿】【了】【,】【叫】【生】【物】【学】【…】【…】【”】【话】【未】【说】【完】【,】【台】【下】【已】【是】【一】【片】【哄】【笑】【声】【。】【这】【样】【的】【场】【景】【,】【在】【之】【后】【的】【两】【年】【里】【从】【未】【间】【断】【过】【。】【从】【那】【一】【刻】【起】【,】【我】【就】【认】【定】【,】【她】【不】【是】【一】【个】【寻】【常】【的】【漂】【亮】【女】【老】【师】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【快】【乐】【的】【笑】【声】【虽】【然】【总】【是】【忍】【不】【住】【从】【她】【嘴】【中】【溜】【出】【,】【不】【过】【她】【的】【严】【格】【倒】【是】【大】【大】【出】【乎】【我】【们】【的】【意】【料】【。】【她】【不】【会】【轻】【声】【细】【语】【地】【讲】【话】【以】【至】【课】【堂】【纪】【律】【一】【团】【糟】【,】【不】【会】【心】【慈】【手】【软】【地】【以】【至】【作】【业】【怎】【么】【也】【收】【不】【齐】【。】【犹】【记】【得】【初】【一】【下】【学】【期】【,】【我】【因】【为】【请】【假】【耽】【误】【了】【一】【天】【学】【习】【,】【 】【第】【二】【天】【便】【堂】【而】【皇】【之】【地】【缺】【交】【了】【作】【业】【。】【迎】【接】【我】【的】【便】【是】【老】【师】【板】【着】【的】【脸】【,】【这】【次】【不】【仅】【让】【我】【领】【教】【了】【她】【“】【亲】【切】【”】【的】【接】【见】【,】【还】【被】【罚】【抄】【了】【一】【通】【作】【业】【。】【当】【时】【实】【在】【烦】【恼】【得】【很】【,】【现】【在】【想】【来】【却】【只】【有】【微】【笑】【了】【。】【为】【自】【己】【的】【稚】【气】【和】【懒】【惰】【,】【也】【为】【老】【师】【的】【不】【留】【情】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【前】【抽】【测】【算】【得】【上】【向】【老】【师】【的】【特】【色】【。】【她】【的】【抽】【测】【并】【不】【印】【在】【纸】【上】【,】【而】【是】【印】【在】【她】【的】【心】【中】【,】【由】【她】【一】【个】【字】【一】【个】【字】【地】【念】【给】【我】【们】【听】【。】【若】【回】【答】【不】【出】【,】【可】【是】【件】【麻】【烦】【事】【。】【因】【此】【上】【课】【前】【,】【或】【安】【静】【地】【默】【诵】【,】【或】【与】【同】【桌】【一】【问】【一】【答】【,】【已】【蔚】【然】【成】【风】【。】【铃】【一】【响】【,】【空】【气】【便】【紧】【张】【而】【活】【泼】【起】【来】【。】【向】【老】【师】【狡】【黠】【地】【笑】【着】【,】【我】【们】【则】【正】【襟】【危】【坐】【,】【生】【怕】【因】【一】【丝】【颤】【动】【引】【起】【她】【的】【注】【意】【。】【但】【总】【有】【几】【个】【倒】【霉】【的】【,】【不】【情】【愿】【地】【被】【她】【那】【双】【玉】【手】【拎】【起】【。】【在】【那】【个】【时】【候】【,】【不】【论】【是】【谁】【,】【都】【尖】【了】【耳】【朵】【去】【听】【那】【检】【测】【题】【是】【刁】【钻】【无】【比】【还】【是】【稀】【松】【平】【常】【。】【若】【是】【刁】【钻】【,】【便】【暗】【喜】【不】【是】【自】【己】【接】【了】【这】【烫】【手】【的】【山】【芋】【;】【若】【是】【稀】【松】【平】【常】【,】【便】【暗】【叹】【为】【何】【不】【难】【他】【一】【难】【。】【其】【间】【的】【滋】【味】【,】【比】【坐】【最】【惊】【险】【的】【过】【山】【车】【还】【要】【来】【得】【刺】【激】【,】【来】【得】【一】【波】【三】【折】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【即】【便】【有】【如】【此】【严】【峻】【的】【测】【验】【横】【亘】【,】【向】【老】【师】【的】【生】【物】【课】【仍】【是】【最】【受】【欢】【迎】【的】【。】【除】【了】【她】【,】【没】【有】【哪】【个】【老】【师】【花】【十】【几】【分】【钟】【的】【时】【间】【讲】【述】【一】【个】【侦】【探】【故】【事】【,】【只】【为】【解】【释】【何】【为】【条】【件】【反】【射】【;】【没】【有】【哪】【个】【老】【师】【扯】【着】【嗓】【子】【把】【答】【案】【读】【得】【像】【诗】【歌】【一】【样】【动】【听】【,】【领】【着】【我】【们】【读】【了】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【,】【只】【为】【教】【会】【我】【们】【答】【题】【的】【方】【法】【;】【没】【有】【哪】【个】【老】【师】【与】【我】【们】【讲】【十】【几】【年】【前】【自】【己】【的】【糗】【事】【,】【只】【为】【让】【身】【心】【疲】【惫】【的】【我】【们】【笑】【逐】【颜】【开】【。】【我】【对】【生】【物】【的】【喜】【爱】【,】【和】【大】【多】【数】【的】【同】【学】【一】【样】【,】【完】【全】【是】【她】【给】【予】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【成】【长】【马】【不】【停】【蹄】【。】【至】【今】【,】【我】【已】【有】【一】【两】【年】【未】【听】【过】【向】【老】【师】【的】【课】【了】【。】【回】【想】【起】【她】【在】【黑】【板】【上】【画】【着】【各】【种】【笨】【拙】【的】【生】【物】【结】【构】【示】【意】【图】【时】【半】【开】【玩】【笑】【的】【话】【:】【“】【你】【们】【莫】【要】【咂】【舌】【头】【呢】【,】【以】【后】【你】【们】【再】【想】【看】【我】【画】【一】【次】【,】【都】【难】【喽】【!】【”】【同】【学】【们】【纷】【纷】【大】【笑】【,】【不】【以】【为】【然】【。】【她】【没】【有】【说】【错】【,】【后】【来】【的】【这】【些】【日】【子】【,】【我】【们】【再】【没】【有】【见】【过】【那】【些】【奇】【形】【怪】【状】【的】【图】【画】【,】【也】【再】【没】【有】【见】【过】【她】【那】【始】【终】【扬】【着】【的】【下】【巴】【,】【再】【也】【没】【有】【见】【过】【那】【闪】【烁】【着】【狡】【黠】【光】【芒】【的】【眼】【睛】【。】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【想】【说】【:】【老】【师】【,】【真】【的】【很】【想】【你】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【如】【此】【佳】【作】【,】【我】【们】【内】【心】【会】【禁】【不】【住】【涌】【起】【阵】【阵】【温】【暖】【,】【那】【些】【师】【生】【之】【间】【曾】【经】【的】【美】【好】【瞬】【间】【或】【许】【也】【会】【翩】【然】【而】【至】【。】【文】【章】【虽】【然】【没】【有】【华】【丽】【的】【辞】【藻】【,】【亦】【无】【曲】【折】【的】【情】【节】【,】【然】【而】【向】【老】【师】【嘴】【中】【溜】【出】【的】【那】【些】【快】【乐】【笑】【声】【、】【那】【双】【玉】【手】【拎】【起】【同】【学】【时】【的】【有】【趣】【画】【面】【、】【生】【怕】【因】【一】【丝】【颤】【动】【引】【起】【她】【注】【意】【的】【真】【切】【感】【受】【,】【无】【不】【栩】【栩】【如】【生】【,】【宛】【如】【亲】【历】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【最】【后】【那】【句】【“】【老】【师】【,】【真】【的】【很】【想】【你】【”】【,】【读】【来】【格】【外】【感】【动】【。】【没】【有】【刻】【骨】【铭】【心】【的】【经】【历】【,】【没】【有】【珍】【惜】【生】【活】【的】【感】【恩】【之】【心】【,】【如】【何】【能】【够】【写】【出】【如】【此】【佳】【篇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【罗】【小】【军】【)】

【<】【i】【m】【g】【 】【s】【r】【c】【=】【"】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【i】【m】【g】【1】【.】【q】【i】【k】【a】【n】【.】【c】【o】【m】【.】【c】【n】【/】【q】【k】【i】【m】【a】【g】【e】【s】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【1】【1】【-】【1】【-】【l】【.】【j】【p】【g】【"】【 】【a】【l】【t】【=】【"】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【i】【m】【g】【1】【.】【q】【i】【k】【a】【n】【.】【c】【o】【m】【.】【c】【n】【/】【q】【k】【i】【m】【a】【g】【e】【s】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【2】【1】【1】【-】【1】【-】【l】【.】【j】【p】【g】【"】【 】【/】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【家】【不】【远】【处】【,】【有】【一】【个】【小】【公】【园】【。】【公】【园】【里】【虽】【无】【高】【山】【瀑】【布】【,】【但】【也】【有】【假】【山】【亭】【榭】【,】【小】【桥】【流】【水】【。】【闲】【暇】【之】【际】【,】【我】【总】【不】【忘】【来】【到】【小】【公】【园】【,】【兴】【尽】【而】【归】【,】【忘】【却】【心】【中】【烦】【恼】【,】【自】【在】【无】【碍】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【不】【,】【刚】【和】【老】【妈】【顶】【了】【嘴】【,】【一】【肚】【子】【的】【火】【只】【恨】【无】【处】【发】【泄】【。】【于】【是】【,】【我】【来】【到】【了】【小】【公】【园】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【公】【园】【里】【很】【冷】【清】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【游】【人】【。】【我】【转】【了】【一】【圈】【,】【心】【情】【仍】【不】【见】【好】【。】【索】【性】【走】【到】【一】【棵】【大】【树】【旁】【坐】【了】【下】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【远】【处】【一】【群】【小】【朋】【友】【正】【围】【坐】【在】【一】【个】【中】【年】【人】【旁】【边】【,】【高】【声】【朗】【读】【着】【什】【么】【。】【或】【许】【中】【年】【人】【是】【他】【们】【的】【老】【师】【,】【或】【许】【是】【他】【们】【的】【朋】【友】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【怀】【着】【好】【奇】【心】【,】【我】【走】【近】【了】【他】【们】【。】【原】【来】【中】【年】【人】【是】【一】【位】【盲】【人】【,】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【在】【读】【书】【给】【他】【听】【。】【我】【静】【静】【地】【听】【着】【那】【童】【稚】【的】【声】【音】【,】【心】【中】【竟】【升】【起】【了】【一】【丝】【甜】【蜜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【读】【完】【后】【,】【发】【现】【了】【我】【,】【一】【个】【个】【很】【高】【兴】【。】【“】【姐】【姐】【,】【你】【是】【想】【加】【入】【我】【们】【的】【队】【伍】【吗】【?】【”】【“】【你】【也】【想】【为】【盲】【人】【叔】【叔】【读】【书】【吗】【?】【”】【我】【被】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【突】【如】【其】【来】【甚】【至】【有】【些】【莽】【撞】【的】【问】【话】【打】【动】【了】【,】【为】【盲】【人】【叔】【叔】【读】【书】【,】【我】【心】【中】【竟】【下】【意】【识】【地】【想】【到】【“】【学】【雷】【锋】【做】【好】【事】【”】【,】【但】【很】【快】【便】【否】【定】【了】【这】【个】【想】【法】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【突】【然】【间】【,】【我】【感】【到】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【不】【仅】【仅】【是】【在】【做】【好】【事】【,】【他】【们】【本】【身】【其】【实】【也】【在】【摄】【入】【知】【识】【、】【尽】【享】【乐】【趣】【啊】【!】【于】【是】【我】【情】【不】【自】【禁】【地】【点】【点】【头】【。】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【一】【下】【子】【炸】【开】【了】【锅】【。】【太】【好】【了】【,】【叔】【叔】【每】【天】【又】【能】【多】【听】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【了】【!】【我】【笑】【了】【,】【心】【中】【的】【烦】【恼】【消】【失】【得】【无】【影】【无】【踪】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【第】【二】【天】【,】【我】【如】【约】【而】【至】【。】【我】【选】【择】【了】【作】【家】【史】【铁】【生】【的】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【朗】【读】【时】【,】【我】【只】【觉】【得】【四】【周】【的】【空】【气】【仿】【佛】【凝】【固】【了】【,】【天】【地】【间】【只】【有】【我】【一】【个】【人】【在】【畅】【游】【,】【我】【用】【自】【己】【最】【动】【听】【的】【声】【音】【读】【出】【那】【饱】【含】【激】【情】【的】【文】【字】【,】【来】【激】【励】【盲】【人】【叔】【叔】【、】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【,】【还】【有】【我】【自】【己】【。】【文】【章】【读】【完】【了】【,】【四】【周】【先】【是】【一】【片】【寂】【静】【,】【而】【后】【爆】【发】【出】【一】【阵】【热】【烈】【的】【掌】【声】【。】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【突】【然】【有】【种】【感】【觉】【,】【在】【这】【里】【,】【我】【只】【读】【了】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【却】【好】【像】【享】【受】【到】【无】【穷】【无】【尽】【的】【乐】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【一】【个】【接】【一】【个】【读】【,】【我】【只】【觉】【得】【公】【园】【上】【空】【飘】【荡】【着】【一】【种】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【,】【有】【如】【天】【籁】【之】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【完】【书】【后】【,】【盲】【人】【叔】【叔】【脸】【上】【洋】【溢】【着】【不】【绝】【的】【笑】【:】【“】【尽】【管】【我】【看】【不】【见】【文】【字】【,】【但】【我】【听】【到】【那】【一】【个】【个】【音】【节】【从】【你】【们】【口】【中】【跳】【跃】【出】【来】【,】【这】【也】【是】【一】【种】【乐】【趣】【,】【一】【种】【最】【美】【的】【乐】【趣】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【,】【一】【个】【小】【朋】【友】【也】【开】【口】【了】【:】【“】【叔】【叔】【,】【其】【实】【我】【以】【前】【讨】【厌】【读】【书】【。】【可】【是】【,】【经】【过】【这】【几】【天】【给】【你】【读】【书】【的】【事】【情】【,】【我】【发】【现】【这】【样】【读】【书】【也】【有】【乐】【趣】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【对】【!】【”】【旁】【边】【的】【小】【朋】【友】【们】【也】【一】【齐】【附】【和】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【其】【实】【读】【书】【也】【是】【一】【种】【最】【大】【的】【乐】【趣】【!】【”】【我】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【那】【以】【后】【,】【我】【每】【天】【如】【约】【而】【至】【,】【风】【雨】【无】【阻】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【&】【n】【b】【s】【p】【;】【 】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【考】【场】【作】【文】【的】【主】【要】【亮】【点】【是】【巧】【选】【角】【度】【,】【升】【华】【“】【乐】【趣】【”】【。】【作】【者】【从】【自】【身】【经】【历】【出】【发】【,】【精】【心】【选】【择】【了】【切】【入】【的】【角】【度】【—】【—】【为】【盲】【人】【义】【务】【读】【书】【,】【记】【述】【了】【自】【己】【的】【读】【书】【经】【历】【,】【表】【现】【了】【一】【种】【特】【别】【形】【式】【下】【的】【“】【乐】【趣】【”】【。】【“】【我】【”】【为】【盲】【人】【读】【书】【的】【“】【那】【一】【刻】【”】【,】【“】【好】【像】【享】【受】【到】【无】【穷】【无】【尽】【的】【乐】【趣】【”】【,】【这】【既】【照】【应】【了】【篇】【首】【的】【题】【记】【,】【又】【进】【一】【步】【深】【刻】【地】【表】【现】【了】【“】【这】【里】【也】【有】【乐】【趣】【”】【的】【内】【蕴】【。】疾病专题【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【乎】【跑】【遍】【了】【所】【有】【的】【书】【店】【,】【仍】【未】【找】【到】【一】【本】【席】【慕】【容】【的】【散】【文】【集】【,】【遗】【憾】【之】【情】【立】【即】【笼】【罩】【心】【头】【,】【寒】【风】【夹】【杂】【着】【落】【叶】【在】【地】【上】【盘】【旋】【,】【回】【家】【的】【路】【变】【得】【漫】【长】【而】【遥】【远】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【来】【到】【天】【桥】【上】【,】【见】【下】【面】【来】【来】【往】【往】【的】【人】【群】【像】【鱼】【一】【般】【游】【动】【着】【,】【而】【天】【边】【的】【夕】【阳】【正】【用】【尽】【最】【后】【的】【气】【力】【,】【把】【橘】【红】【色】【的】【暖】【意】【洒】【向】【人】【间】【,】【钟】【爱】【夕】【阳】【的】【我】【像】【是】【得】【到】【一】【种】【无】【声】【的】【安】【慰】【,】【遗】【憾】【带】【来】【的】【失】【落】【情】【绪】【有】【了】【好】【转】【,】【当】【夜】【幕】【开】【始】【覆】【盖】【整】【座】【城】【市】【时】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【明】【白】【了】【这】【也】【许】【就】【是】【一】【种】【宿】【命】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【买】【不】【到】【席】【慕】【容】【的】【书】【,】【这】【种】【遗】【憾】【是】【上】【天】【注】【定】【的】【,】【我】【只】【好】【把】【那】【些】【让】【我】【欢】【愉】【或】【者】【悲】【切】【的】【文】【字】【收】【藏】【在】【心】【灵】【的】【某】【个】【角】【落】【。】【也】【许】【这】【就】【叫】【做】【有】【缘】【无】【分】【吧】【。】【缘】【分】【不】【只】【是】【存】【于】【人】【与】【人】【之】【间】【,】【也】【存】【于】【人】【与】【物】【之】【间】【,】【就】【像】【当】【初】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【在】【图】【书】【馆】【里】【随】【意】【挑】【选】【了】【一】【本】【席】【慕】【容】【的】【散】【文】【集】【,】【这】【就】【是】【缘】【分】【,】【我】【的】【心】【灵】【在】【不】【经】【意】【中】【就】【被】【它】【触】【及】【,】【与】【之】【相】【通】【,】【为】【之】【感】【动】【。】【有】【人】【说】【,】【有】【缘】【比】【无】【缘】【更】【让】【人】【痛】【苦】【。】【原】【本】【我】【也】【是】【这】【样】【认】【为】【的】【,】【可】【是】【现】【在】【却】【有】【了】【新】【的】【想】【法】【,】【世】【上】【有】【缘】【无】【分】【的】【事】【多】【矣】【,】【得】【到】【固】【然】【可】【喜】【,】【失】【去】【会】【留】【有】【遗】【憾】【,】【但】【唯】【有】【感】【到】【遗】【憾】【,】【才】【会】【认】【识】【到】【它】【对】【自】【己】【的】【重】【要】【性】【。】【或】【者】【说】【,】【因】【为】【明】【知】【要】【失】【去】【,】【才】【会】【更】【加】【留】【恋】【和】【不】【舍】【。】【比】【如】【一】【本】【书】【,】【想】【到】【有】【一】【天】【,】【它】【会】【不】【在】【自】【己】【熟】【悉】【的】【角】【落】【,】【会】【永】【久】【地】【消】【失】【在】【自】【己】【的】【视】【线】【之】【外】【,】【总】【会】【有】【一】【份】【惆】【怅】【和】【不】【甘】【的】【心】【情】【吧】【,】【所】【以】【才】【会】【一】【遍】【一】【遍】【地】【抚】【摸】【,】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【倾】【心】【阅】【读】【,】【只】【是】【为】【了】【把】【它】【的】【样】【子】【,】【它】【的】【具】【体】【细】【节】【和】【带】【给】【自】【己】【的】【无】【尽】【感】【动】【永】【远】【地】【刻】【印】【于】【自】【己】【心】【灵】【的】【画】【板】【,】【遗】【憾】【总】【是】【带】【有】【些】【心】【痛】【和】【无】【奈】【的】【,】【但】【它】【会】【使】【人】【懂】【得】【珍】【惜】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【黄】【生】【借】【书】【说】【》】【是】【我】【初】【二】【时】【学】【过】【的】【一】【篇】【课】【文】【,】【在】【作】【者】【袁】【枚】【的】【眼】【里】【,】【“】【书】【非】【借】【不】【能】【读】【也】【”】【,】【对】【于】【那】【些】【藏】【书】【甚】【丰】【的】【“】【天】【子】【”】【“】【富】【贵】【人】【”】【,】【他】【认】【为】【其】【中】【的】【读】【书】【者】【有】【几】【?】【这】【篇】【课】【文】【使】【我】【懂】【得】【了】【“】【占】【有】【并】【不】【等】【于】【拥】【有】【,】【心】【灵】【的】【拥】【有】【才】【算】【是】【真】【正】【的】【占】【有】【”】【这】【一】【道】【理】【。】【袁】【枚】【自】【小】【喜】【爱】【读】【书】【,】【家】【里】【却】【因】【为】【贫】【困】【而】【没】【有】【书】【,】【这】【不】【能】【不】【说】【是】【他】【人】【生】【的】【遗】【憾】【,】【但】【正】【是】【这】【种】【深】【深】【的】【遗】【憾】【反】【而】【激】【励】【着】【他】【不】【断】【地】【借】【书】【来】【读】【而】【日】【后】【终】【成】【饱】【学】【之】【士】【、】【文】【坛】【巨】【子】【。】【想】【到】【这】【篇】【学】【过】【的】【课】【文】【,】【我】【的】【心】【情】【一】【下】【子】【开】【朗】【了】【,】【甚】【至】【觉】【得】【买】【不】【到】【这】【本】【书】【也】【许】【就】【是】【最】【好】【的】【结】【局】【。】【生】【活】【中】【,】【有】【时】【失】【去】【也】【是】【一】【种】【幸】【运】【,】【遗】【憾】【也】【是】【一】【种】【美】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【又】【由】【此】【而】【想】【到】【了】【许】【多】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【旷】【世】【奇】【书】【《】【红】【楼】【梦】【》】【后】【四】【十】【回】【的】【失】【散】【,】【可】【谓】【是】【文】【学】【史】【上】【最】【大】【的】【遗】【憾】【。】【但】【是】【试】【想】【一】【下】【,】【如】【果】【《】【红】【楼】【梦】【》】【是】【一】【本】【完】【整】【的】【书】【,】【人】【们】【是】【否】【还】【会】【像】【现】【在】【这】【样】【对】【它】【有】【更】【多】【的】【关】【注】【?】【是】【否】【会】【让】【后】【人】【不】【断】【地】【对】【书】【中】【的】【人】【物】【命】【运】【和】【故】【事】【结】【局】【进】【行】【推】【测】【、】【展】【开】【想】【象】【,】【甚】【至】【去】【续】【写】【?】【朦】【朦】【胧】【胧】【,】【隐】【隐】【绰】【绰】【,】【宛】【然】【美】【人】【的】【背】【影】【,】【引】【人】【出】【神】【,】【却】【又】【始】【终】【无】【法】【看】【到】【她】【的】【正】【面】【。】【遗】【憾】【的】【魅】【力】【,】【大】【概】【就】【在】【于】【此】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【罗】【密】【欧】【与】【朱】【丽】【叶】【》】【是】【永】【恒】【的】【经】【典】【,】【岁】【月】【的】【流】【逝】【冲】【不】【毁】【它】【在】【文】【学】【史】【上】【的】【重】【要】【地】【位】【。】【倘】【若】【故】【事】【结】【局】【是】【“】【有】【情】【人】【终】【成】【眷】【属】【”】【的】【大】【团】【圆】【,】【人】【们】【看】【过】【、】【感】【叹】【过】【之】【后】【,】【是】【否】【还】【会】【反】【复】【品】【味】【、】【反】【复】【为】【之】【扼】【腕】【叹】【息】【?】【倘】【若】【罗】【密】【欧】【与】【朱】【丽】【叶】【的】【爱】【情】【一】【如】【芸】【芸】【众】【生】【,】【人】【们】【自】【然】【会】【认】【为】【“】【不】【过】【如】【此】【”】【而】【将】【其】【很】【快】【遗】【忘】【。】【唯】【有】【令】【人】【遗】【憾】【,】【才】【使】【他】【们】【的】【爱】【情】【放】【射】【出】【了】【动】【人】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【但】【是】【,】【在】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【,】【人】【们】【总】【是】【把】【遗】【憾】【视】【为】【一】【种】【难】【以】【弥】【补】【的】【不】【足】【,】【一】【种】【让】【人】【无】【法】【释】【怀】【的】【无】【奈】【,】【他】【们】【喜】【欢】【什】【么】【都】【完】【美】【无】【瑕】【,】【什】【么】【都】【十】【全】【十】【美】【,】【其】【实】【,】【世】【上】【根】【本】【就】【没】【有】【这】【样】【的】【好】【事】【,】【如】【果】【这】【个】【世】【界】【上】【没】【有】【遗】【憾】【,】【生】【活】【就】【会】【了】【无】【意】【趣】【,】【人】【们】【就】【会】【失】【去】【许】【多】【的】【追】【求】【、】【想】【象】【和】【期】【盼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【既】【然】【这】【个】【世】【界】【总】【是】【充】【满】【遗】【憾】【,】【那】【么】【我】【们】【就】【要】【容】【忍】【遗】【憾】【,】【接】【纳】【遗】【憾】【,】【不】【因】【遗】【憾】【而】【难】【受】【,】【而】【耿】【耿】【于】【怀】【。】【我】【小】【学】【时】【有】【一】【好】【友】【,】【人】【长】【得】【很】【美】【,】【就】【是】【在】【靠】【近】【嘴】【唇】【的】【右】【下】【方】【长】【了】【一】【颗】【绿】【豆】【大】【的】【黑】【痣】【,】【她】【总】【是】【觉】【得】【这】【是】【一】【个】【遗】【憾】【,】【太】【想】【完】【美】【的】【她】【甚】【至】【为】【之】【闷】【闷】【不】【乐】【,】【可】【是】【在】【我】【看】【来】【这】【没】【有】【什】【么】【呀】【,】【最】【多】【算】【是】【个】【美】【丽】【的】【遗】【憾】【吧】【,】【所】【以】【我】【常】【和】【她】【开】【玩】【笑】【:】【这】【是】【美】【人】【痣】【,】【有】【了】【它】【,】【你】【就】【丢】【不】【掉】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【校】【每】【年】【评】【三】【好】【生】【,】【总】【有】【一】【些】【品】【学】【兼】【优】【的】【学】【生】【因】【为】【体】【育】【成】【绩】【欠】【佳】【而】【落】【选】【,】【看】【来】【校】【方】【总】【希】【望】【评】【出】【来】【的】【三】【好】【生】【没】【有】【任】【何】【遗】【憾】【。】【这】【种】【做】【法】【是】【值】【得】【商】【榷】【的】【,】【纵】【观】【那】【些】【作】【出】【了】【杰】【出】【贡】【献】【的】【人】【才】【,】【他】【们】【身】【上】【总】【有】【这】【样】【或】【那】【样】【的】【缺】【憾】【,】【但】【是】【在】【我】【看】【来】【,】【唯】【有】【存】【在】【于】【他】【们】【身】【上】【那】【些】【令】【人】【感】【到】【遗】【憾】【的】【东】【西】【,】【才】【让】【我】【们】【真】【实】【地】【感】【到】【他】【们】【的】【崇】【高】【和】【伟】【大】【。】【正】【如】【列】【宁】【所】【说】【,】【一】【个】【人】【的】【缺】【点】【和】【优】【点】【是】【相】【反】【相】【成】【的】【,】【缺】【点】【的】【延】【伸】【就】【是】【优】【点】【。】【这】【是】【一】【句】【很】【深】【刻】【的】【话】【,】【充】【满】【了】【辩】【证】【法】【。】【所】【以】【说】【,】【遗】【憾】【里】【往】【往】【包】【含】【着】【闪】【光】【的】【东】【西】【,】【遗】【憾】【也】【是】【一】【种】【美】【丽】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【生】【路】【上】【,】【大】【千】【世】【界】【,】【遗】【憾】【的】【东】【西】【多】【矣】【。】【但】【满】【月】【不】【是】【最】【美】【,】【最】【美】【的】【是】【缺】【失】【了】【一】【边】【的】【明】【月】【;】【朝】【阳】【不】【是】【最】【灿】【烂】【的】【,】【最】【灿】【烂】【的】【是】【被】【薄】【雾】【彩】【云】【遮】【住】【一】【角】【的】【旭】【日】【。】【与】【其】【不】【能】【释】【怀】【于】【遗】【憾】【,】【为】【遗】【憾】【而】【叹】【息】【和】【追】【悔】【,】【还】【不】【如】【树】【立】【豁】【达】【的】【生】【活】【态】【度】【,】【无】【悔】【无】【憾】【地】【去】【创】【造】【自】【己】【的】【新】【生】【活】【。】【说】【遗】【憾】【是】【一】【种】【美】【丽】【,】【还】【因】【为】【它】【可】【以】【转】【换】【成】【一】【种】【力】【量】【和】【更】【积】【极】【的】【人】【生】【态】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【有】【许】【多】【值】【得】【我】【们】【学】【习】【的】【地】【方】【,】【但】【我】【只】【想】【集】【中】【谈】【一】【下】【它】【丰】【富】【的】【思】【想】【层】【次】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【始】【时】【,】【作】【者】【因】【未】【能】【买】【到】【席】【慕】【容】【的】【书】【而】【感】【到】【深】【深】【的】【遗】【憾】【,】【有】【一】【种】【“】【心】【痛】【和】【无】【奈】【”】【,】【这】【种】【情】【绪】【在】【感】【受】【到】【夕】【阳】【的】【暖】【意】【之】【时】【有】【了】【好】【转】【,】【但】【真】【正】【让】【心】【情】【开】【朗】【起】【来】【的】【是】【想】【起】【了】【《】【黄】【生】【借】【书】【说】【》】【一】【文】【,】【袁】【枚】【颇】【具】【哲】【学】【意】【味】【的】【思】【考】【启】【发】【了】【作】【者】【,】【使】【她】【有】【了】【“】【失】【去】【也】【是】【一】【种】【幸】【运】【,】【遗】【憾】【也】【是】【一】【种】【美】【丽】【”】【的】【人】【生】【感】【悟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【个】【从】【感】【性】【到】【理】【性】【的】【过】【程】【。】【至】【此】【结】【束】【全】【文】【也】【未】【尝】【不】【可】【,】【但】【接】【下】【来】【所】【举】【的】【《】【红】【楼】【梦】【》】【和】【《】【罗】【密】【欧】【与】【朱】【丽】【叶】【》】【这】【两】【个】【例】【子】【,】【又】【使】【文】【章】【跃】【入】【了】【一】【个】【新】【层】【面】【,】【那】【就】【是】【从】【对】【个】【别】【事】【例】【的】【议】【论】【到】【对】【一】【般】【规】【律】【的】【揭】【示】【,】【让】【人】【看】【到】【“】【遗】【憾】【也】【是】【一】【种】【美】【丽】【”】【的】【观】【点】【是】【对】【普】【遍】【存】【在】【的】【一】【种】【现】【象】【的】【概】【括】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【前】【面】【两】【个】【层】【次】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【后】【面】【又】【接】【着】【对】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【存】【在】【的】【问】【题】【发】【表】【自】【己】【的】【看】【法】【,】【这】【又】【使】【文】【章】【具】【有】【了】【相】【当】【的】【深】【度】【,】【非】【一】【般】【作】【文】【所】【能】【抵】【达】【。】【一】【个】【女】【孩】【总】【为】【脸】【上】【的】【一】【个】【痣】【感】【到】【遗】【憾】【,】【闷】【闷】【不】【乐】【;】【评】【选】【三】【好】【生】【非】【要】【十】【全】【十】【美】【,】【不】【容】【有】【遗】【憾】【,】【这】【两】【个】【例】【子】【都】【说】【明】【正】【确】【地】【对】【待】【遗】【憾】【,】【看】【到】【遗】【憾】【的】【积】【极】【意】【义】【,】【是】【很】【重】【要】【的】【。】【这】【样】【一】【来】【,】【写】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【就】【有】【了】【较】【强】【的】【现】【实】【针】【对】【性】【,】【更】【增】【添】【了】【一】【种】【分】【量】【。】【现】【在】【的】【学】【生】【作】【文】【很】【少】【有】【联】【系】【生】【活】【、】【质】【疑】【生】【活】【、】【重】【新】【审】【视】【生】【活】【这】【样】【的】【思】【想】【层】【次】【。】【其】【实】【,】【这】【是】【文】【章】【的】【一】【个】【重】【要】【的】【思】【想】【品】【格】【,】【白】【居】【易】【说】【:】【“】【文】【章】【合】【为】【时】【而】【著】【,】【歌】【诗】【合】【为】【事】【而】【作】【”】【,】【说】【的】【就】【是】【写】【作】【要】【联】【系】【社】【会】【生】【活】【,】【适】【合】【时】【代】【要】【求】【,】【他】【还】【说】【写】【作】【诗】【文】【的】【目】【的】【是】【“】【救】【济】【人】【病】【,】【裨】【补】【时】【阙】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【丰】【富】【的】【思】【想】【层】【次】【是】【许】【多】【好】【文】【章】【的】【共】【同】【特】【点】【。】【大】【自】【然】【中】【的】【层】【峦】【叠】【嶂】【、】【波】【浪】【涟】【漪】【、】【层】【层】【梯】【田】【总】【能】【给】【人】【带】【来】【美】【感】【,】【就】【是】【因】【为】【它】【们】【有】【着】【丰】【富】【的】【层】【次】【。】【不】【少】【作】【文】【给】【人】【的】【印】【象】【就】【是】【平】【板】【、】【单】【一】【、】【直】【白】【、】【浅】【薄】【,】【浅】【尝】【辄】【止】【,】【无】【法】【带】【领】【读】【者】【进】【入】【一】【种】【曲】【径】【通】【幽】【的】【深】【邃】【境】【界】【,】【只】【能】【使】【人】【感】【到】【索】【然】【无】【味】【。】【要】【有】【丰】【富】【的】【思】【想】【层】【次】【,】【就】【要】【执】【著】【地】【深】【究】【事】【物】【的】【底】【蕴】【,】【不】【懈】【地】【探】【寻】【深】【层】【的】【事】【理】【;】【就】【要】【连】【续】【地】【进】【行】【纵】【向】【的】【思】【维】【发】【散】【,】【就】【是】【不】【断】【地】【进】【行】【自】【我】【追】【问】【和】【逻】【辑】【追】【踪】【。】【将】【文】【章】【写】【得】【富】【有】【层】【次】【感】【,】【不】【仅】【仅】【是】【一】【个】【写】【作】【技】【巧】【的】【问】【题】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【要】【学】【会】【理】【性】【思】【维】【,】【能】【够】【由】【此】【及】【彼】【、】【由】【表】【及】【里】【、】【由】【浅】【入】【深】【地】【思】【考】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【知】【识】【的】【积】【累】【和】【多】【种】【信】【息】【的】【储】【存】【,】【也】【难】【使】【新】【的】【思】【想】【不】【断】【涌】【出】【。】【从】【此】【文】【可】【看】【出】【,】【作】【者】【平】【时】【是】【关】【心】【生】【活】【的】【,】【从】【中】【获】【取】【了】【大】【量】【有】【价】【值】【的】【感】【性】【材】【料】【,】【并】【具】【有】【了】【从】【感】【性】【材】【料】【中】【生】【发】【出】【新】【思】【想】【的】【能】【力】【。】【假】【如】【没】【有】【了】【文】【章】【那】【些】【触】【发】【思】【想】【的】【材】【料】【,】【层】【层】【的】【思】【想】【就】【会】【成】【为】【空】【中】【楼】【阁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【戚】【薇】【同】【学】【能】【够】【写】【出】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【并】【非】【一】【蹴】【而】【就】【,】【而】【是】【有】【一】【个】【较】【长】【的】【思】【考】【过】【程】【。】【她】【的】【思】【想】【虽】【然】【比】【较】【成】【熟】【,】【但】【最】【初】【她】【给】【我】【看】【的】【时】【候】【,】【也】【只】【有】【文】【章】【的】【前】【三】【段】【而】【已】【。】【我】【说】【,】【如】【果】【要】【拿】【出】【去】【发】【表】【还】【不】【行】【,】【还】【要】【多】【想】【想】【。】【结】【果】【,】【她】【越】【想】【越】【觉】【得】【初】【稿】【显】【得】【单】【薄】【,】【越】【写】【越】【觉】【得】【有】【许】【多】【东】【西】【还】【没】【有】【挖】【掘】【出】【来】【。】【据】【我】【观】【察】【,】【能】【够】【一】【挥】【而】【就】【地】【写】【出】【好】【文】【章】【的】【中】【学】【生】【极】【少】【极】【少】【。】【丰】【富】【的】【思】【想】【层】【次】【,】【当】【然】【不】【会】【像】【煤】【层】【的】【形】【成】【那】【样】【需】【要】【久】【远】【的】【年】【代】【,】【但】【也】【难】【以】【速】【成】【。】【思】【想】【层】【次】【的】【生】【成】【是】【一】【个】【难】【产】【的】【过】【程】【,】【需】【要】【耐】【心】【地】【安】【静】【地】【思】【考】【,】【急】【功】【近】【利】【只】【会】【窒】【息】【和】【扼】【杀】【思】【想】【的】【苗】【子】【。】【以】【前】【我】【推】【荐】【给】【本】【刊】【的】【多】【篇】【优】【秀】【作】【文】【也】【都】【是】【经】【过】【一】【段】【时】【间】【的】【酝】【酿】【和】【反】【复】【修】【改】【而】【成】【的】【。】【(】【荐】【评】【老】【师】【:】【毛】【荣】【富】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【少】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【课】【上】【常】【常】【感】【到】【“】【没】【什】【么】【可】【写】【”】【,】【或】【抱】【着】【“】【抓】【到】【一】【个】【算】【一】【个】【”】【,】【“】【拾】【到】【篮】【里】【就】【是】【菜】【”】【的】【态】【度】【,】【这】【是】【不】【可】【取】【的】【。】【没】【有】【米】【,】【当】【然】【无】【以】【成】【粥】【;】【有】【了】【米】【呢】【,】【关】【键】【还】【要】【注】【意】【舂】【洗】【,】【去】【除】【杂】【质】【,】【这】【样】【烧】【成】【的】【粥】【才】【香】【甜】【可】【口】【。】【怎】【样】【把】【自】【己】【所】【汲】【取】【的】【材】【料】【用】【在】【作】【文】【里】【呢】【?】【这】【涉】【及】【文】【章】【的】【选】【材】【问】【题】【。】【选】【材】【就】【是】【细】【筛】【精】【选】【材】【料】【,】【即】【在】【确】【立】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【的】【基】【础】【上】【对】【占】【有】【的】【材】【料】【进】【行】【取】【舍】【的】【构】【思】【过】【程】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【得】【当】【,】【可】【以】【增】【强】【文】【章】【的】【表】【现】【力】【,】【让】【同】【学】【和】【老】【师】【刮】【目】【相】【看】【。】【如】【果】【选】【材】【不】【当】【,】【就】【会】【干】【扰】【、】【冲】【淡】【文】【章】【的】【主】【题】【,】【影】【响】【、】【削】【弱】【文】【章】【的】【说】【服】【力】【、】【感】【染】【力】【。】【从】【这】【个】【意】【义】【上】【说】【,】【选】【材】【的】【确】【是】【一】【门】【高】【超】【的】【写】【作】【艺】【术】【。】【那】【么】【,】【如】【何】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【作】【文】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【切】【题】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【准】【确】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【,】【指】【文】【章】【中】【所】【选】【用】【的】【材】【料】【要】【符】【合】【中】【心】【的】【需】【要】【,】【使】【材】【料】【的】【含】【义】【与】【主】【题】【完】【全】【一】【致】【。】【因】【为】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【是】【蕴】【涵】【渗】【透】【在】【材】【料】【之】【中】【的】【,】【特】【定】【的】【材】【料】【只】【能】【表】【现】【一】【个】【特】【定】【的】【中】【心】【,】【所】【以】【选】【材】【必】【须】【切】【题】【。】【要】【力】【求】【选】【取】【最】【能】【表】【现】【中】【心】【的】【材】【料】【,】【果】【断】【舍】【弃】【与】【中】【心】【无】【关】【的】【材】【料】【。】【万】【不】【可】【把】【跟】【中】【心】【毫】【无】【关】【系】【的】【材】【料】【堆】【砌】【起】【来】【硬】【凑】【成】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【这】【好】【比】【“】【煮】【鸡】【不】【煺】【毛】【”】【,】【鸡】【肉】【本】【是】【珍】【馐】【佳】【肴】【,】【若】【连】【毛】【一】【起】【煮】【,】【谁】【还】【愿】【吃】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【熟】【知】【的】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【的】【小】【说】【《】【孔】【乙】【己】【》】【,】【它】【之】【所】【以】【脍】【炙】【人】【口】【,】【恐】【怕】【跟】【作】【者】【精】【心】【的】【选】【材】【不】【无】【关】【系】【。】【文】【章】【浓】【墨】【重】【彩】【地】【详】【写】【孔】【乙】【己】【那】【又】【脏】【又】【破】【的】【长】【衫】【、】【为】【掩】【饰】【偷】【书】【的】【辩】【白】【、】【之】【乎】【者】【也】【的】【谈】【吐】【以】【及】【教】【认】【“】【茴】【”】【字】【的】【四】【种】【写】【法】【。】【这】【些】【题】【材】【表】【现】【了】【孔】【乙】【己】【的】【迂】【腐】【、】【麻】【木】【,】【充】【分】【说】【明】【他】【受】【封】【建】【教】【育】【思】【想】【毒】【害】【之】【深】【,】【说】【明】【科】【举】【制】【度】【不】【是】【把】【人】【培】【养】【成】【丁】【举】【人】【那】【样】【的】【损】【人】【者】【,】【就】【是】【把】【人】【糟】【蹋】【成】【孔】【乙】【己】【这】【样】【的】【被】【损】【害】【者】【。】【而】【对】【孔】【乙】【己】【如】【何】【偷】【书】【、】【如】【何】【挨】【打】【的】【过】【程】【,】【虽】【从】【侧】【面】【略】【写】【,】【但】【这】【些】【材】【料】【也】【与】【表】【达】【中】【心】【有】【关】【系】【,】【只】【不】【过】【作】【者】【采】【用】【这】【种】【有】【正】【有】【侧】【,】【有】【详】【有】【略】【的】【描】【写】【,】【使】【故】【事】【情】【节】【有】【起】【有】【伏】【,】【一】【味】【详】【或】【一】【味】【略】【都】【会】【使】【读】【者】【感】【到】【厌】【倦】【。】【总】【之】【,】【材】【料】【要】【服】【从】【“】【意】【”】【的】【安】【排】【,】【要】【以】【“】【意】【”】【统】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【切】【题】【的】【问】【题】【如】【此】【重】【要】【,】【而】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【中】【的】【选】【材】【毛】【病】【却】【又】【常】【常】【出】【在】【这】【里】【。】【究】【其】【原】【因】【有】【二】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【 】【不】【勤】【于】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【些】【学】【生】【写】【作】【文】【喜】【欢】【速】【成】【,】【提】【笔】【便】【写】【,】【写】【完】【后】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【还】【有】【更】【切】【题】【的】【材】【料】【。】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【删】【去】【重】【写】【。】【倘】【在】【平】【时】【,】【倒】【也】【罢】【了】【;】【若】【是】【限】【时】【作】【文】【,】【删】【吧】【不】【允】【许】【,】【不】【删】【吧】【却】【不】【甘】【心】【。】【这】【样】【岂】【不】【搞】【得】【很】【尴】【尬】【?】【如】【果】【在】【动】【笔】【前】【给】【自】【己】【留】【点】【时】【间】【,】【将】【所】【有】【能】【够】【想】【到】【的】【材】【料】【都】【集】【中】【起】【来】【,】【给】【它】【们】【排】【排】【队】【,】【从】【中】【确】【定】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【不】【该】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【先】【用】【,】【哪】【些】【材】【料】【后】【用】【,】【经】【过】【一】【番】【排】【列】【筛】【选】【,】【就】【不】【会】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【、】【顾】【此】【失】【彼】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【不】【善】【于】【选】【用】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【的】【学】【生】【时】【常】【感】【叹】【,】【同】【一】【件】【事】【、】【同】【一】【个】【人】【,】【别】【人】【写】【出】【来】【就】【格】【外】【细】【致】【、】【生】【动】【,】【而】【一】【到】【自】【己】【手】【里】【就】【干】【瘪】【得】【很】【。】【原】【因】【在】【于】【选】【材】【时】【只】【限】【于】【一】【些】【直】【接】【的】【、】【正】【面】【的】【表】【现】【主】【题】【的】【材】【料】【,】【而】【对】【那】【些】【间】【接】【的】【、】【侧】【面】【的】【材】【料】【则】【熟】【视】【无】【睹】【,】【冷】【落】【不】【用】【。】【这】【些】【辅】【助】【材】【料】【表】【面】【看】【上】【去】【似】【与】【写】【作】【意】【图】【没】【有】【多】【大】【关】【系】【,】【可】【是】【经】【过】【作】【者】【精】【巧】【的】【剪】【裁】【加】【工】【,】【却】【可】【以】【出】【人】【意】【料】【地】【对】【主】【题】【起】【到】【烘】【托】【、】【反】【衬】【、】【强】【化】【的】【作】【用】【,】【使】【文】【章】【血】【肉】【丰】【满】【,】【细】【腻】【感】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【真】【实】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【代】【学】【者】【钱】【谦】【益】【说】【:】【“】【真】【则】【精】【金】【美】【玉】【,】【伪】【则】【瓦】【砾】【粪】【土】【也】【。】【”】【这】【句】【话】【告】【诉】【我】【们】【在】【作】【文】【选】【材】【时】【,】【不】【只】【要】【看】【材】【料】【是】【否】【切】【题】【,】【还】【要】【看】【它】【是】【否】【真】【实】【,】【是】【否】【具】【有】【“】【可】【信】【”】【度】【。】【只】【有】【真】【实】【,】【只】【有】【信】【实】【,】【文】【章】【才】【有】【生】【命】【力】【,】【才】【能】【感】【动】【人】【、】【打】【动】【人】【。】【选】【材】【真】【实】【包】【含】【两】【方】【面】【内】【容】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【?】【郾】【 】【生】【活】【真】【实】【:】【选】【取】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【真】【实】【的】【材】【料】【,】【必】【然】【是】【为】【同】【学】【们】【所】【熟】【知】【的】【材】【料】【。】【法】【国】【艺】【术】【大】【师】【罗】【丹】【说】【过】【:】【“】【最】【美】【的】【题】【材】【摆】【在】【你】【们】【面】【前】【,】【那】【就】【是】【你】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【物】【。】【”】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【假】【如】【没】【有】【登】【过】【东】【岳】【,】【决】【不】【会】【有】【“】【一】【览】【众】【山】【小】【”】【的】【感】【受】【;】【如】【果】【没】【有】【见】【过】【庐】【山】【,】【一】【定】【不】【会】【产】【生】【“】【飞】【流】【直】【下】【三】【千】【尺】【”】【的】【共】【鸣】【。】【不】【置】【身】【于】【枫】【林】【晚】【景】【,】【哪】【有】【“】【霜】【叶】【红】【于】【二】【月】【花】【”】【之】【赞】【叹】【;】【不】【亲】【历】【水】【乡】【春】【天】【,】【怎】【会】【直】【抒】【“】【能】【不】【忆】【江】【南】【”】【之】【胸】【臆】【。】【中】【学】【生】【们】【初】【学】【写】【作】【,】【应】【该】【选】【取】【自】【己】【最】【为】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【或】【事】【来】【写】【。】【在】【童】【年】【的】【漫】【长】【记】【忆】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【终】【生】【难】【忘】【的】【趣】【事】【;】【在】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【伙】【伴】【中】【,】【一】【定】【有】【我】【们】【情】【投】【意】【合】【的】【挚】【友】【;】【在】【成】【长】【的】【日】【历】【里】【,】【一】【定】【记】【载】【着】【我】【们】【的】【成】【功】【与】【失】【败】【。】【何】【不】【把】【它】【们】【拿】【来】【,】【使】【之】【成】【为】【同】【学】【们】【作】【文】【的】【最】【佳】【题】【材】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朱】【自】【清】【的】【《】【背】【影】【》】【,】【一】【直】【是】【初】【中】【课】【本】【的】【保】【留】【篇】【目】【,】【感】【动】【过】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【读】【者】【,】【教】【育】【了】【一】【代】【又】【一】【代】【学】【子】【。】【然】【而】【,】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【语】【言】【极】【其】【质】【朴】【无】【华】【,】【何】【以】【这】【般】【感】【人】【至】【深】【?】【一】【个】【重】【要】【原】【因】【就】【是】【作】【者】【写】【的】【是】【自】【己】【的】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【、】【亲】【身】【感】【受】【,】【人】【真】【事】【真】【,】【情】【真】【意】【真】【。】【每】【个】【人】【都】【有】【自】【己】【的】【家】【庭】【,】【家】【庭】【是】【同】【学】【们】【生】【活】【的】【摇】【篮】【。】【家】【庭】【里】【有】【我】【们】【最】【熟】【悉】【的】【人】【和】【事】【,】【有】【我】【们】【最】【受】【感】【动】【的】【材】【料】【。】【这】【儿】【有】【温】【馨】【,】【有】【和】【谐】【,】【有】【天】【下】【最】【博】【大】【深】【沉】【、】【最】【细】【腻】【真】【挚】【的】【亲】【情】【,】【父】【母】【之】【恩】【、】【祖】【孙】【之】【爱】【、】【手】【足】【之】【情】【…】【…】【但】【这】【里】【也】【不】【常】【是】【宁】【静】【的】【港】【湾】【,】【有】【时】【也】【会】【风】【波】【骤】【起】【,】【让】【人】【好】【生】【烦】【恼】【。】【其】【实】【,】【亲】【昵】【也】【罢】【,】【唠】【叨】【也】【罢】【,】【攀】【谈】【也】【罢】【,】【争】【执】【也】【罢】【,】【此】【间】【蕴】【涵】【的】【永】【远】【是】【人】【类】【最】【圣】【洁】【的】【情】【愫】【。】【还】【记】【否】【?】【那】【委】【屈】【后】【的】【一】【句】【慰】【藉】【,】【那】【挫】【折】【后】【的】【一】【次】【抚】【摸】【,】【不】【似】【那】【春】【风】【细】【雨】【滋】【润】【心】【头】【?】【无】【须】【惊】【讶】【,】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【可】【能】【是】【平】【凡】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【平】【淡】【的】【,】【家】【庭】【故】【事】【可】【能】【是】【单】【纯】【的】【甚】【至】【是】【单】【调】【的】【,】【但】【只】【要】【用】【心】【体】【会】【,】【努】【力】【挖】【掘】【出】【心】【灵】【深】【处】【某】【段】【不】【寻】【常】【的】【历】【程】【,】【或】【许】【记】【下】【亲】【人】【间】【的】【一】【个】【细】【小】【动】【作】【、】【一】【个】【细】【微】【情】【节】【、】【一】【个】【眼】【神】【、】【一】【种】【姿】【势】【,】【以】【此】【传】【达】【自】【己】【真】【真】【切】【切】【的】【亲】【情】【感】【受】【和】【对】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【的】【深】【刻】【理】【解】【,】【就】【会】【写】【出】【一】【个】【动】【人】【的】【家】【,】【让】【人】【震】【颤】【,】【让】【人】【共】【鸣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【真】【实】【是】【文】【章】【的】【生】【命】【保】【证】【。】【那】【些】【胡】【编】【乱】【造】【的】【所】【谓】【“】【感】【人】【”】【故】【事】【,】【只】【会】【让】【读】【者】【反】【感】【。】【有】【一】【些】【学】【生】【为】【了】【表】【明】【自】【己】【的】【“】【崇】【高】【”】【,】【文】【章】【始】【终】【不】【离】【“】【车】【上】【让】【座】【”】【、】【“】【捐】【钱】【救】【灾】【”】【“】【入】【水】【救】【人】【”】【等】【。】【我】【们】【希】【望】【社】【会】【充】【满】【关】【怀】【,】【充】【满】【和】【谐】【,】【可】【是】【我】【们】【不】【希】【望】【学】【生】【的】【文】【章】【里】【始】【终】【充】【满】【假】【话】【、】【充】【满】【谎】【言】【。】【俗】【话】【说】【:】【不】【真】【读】【者】【无】【。】【选】【择】【熟】【悉】【的】【材】【料】【,】【固】【然】【要】【抛】【弃】【那】【些】【胡】【乱】【地】【编】【造】【故】【事】【、】【想】【当】【然】【地】【塑】【造】【人】【物】【以】【及】【无】【中】【生】【有】【地】【捏】【造】【感】【情】【的】【做】【法】【。】【然】【而】【,】【如】【果】【一】【味】【地】【直】【录】【生】【活】【,】【不】【作】【任】【何】【剪】【接】【加】【工】【,】【甚】【至】【把】【那】【些】【不】【成】【熟】【的】【感】【受】【、】【不】【健】【康】【的】【情】【调】【也】【带】【进】【文】【章】【中】【来】【,】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【只】【会】【黯】【然】【失】【色】【,】【何】【谈】【动】【人】【?】【这】【也】【正】【是】【下】【文】【要】【谈】【到】【的】【选】【材】【真】【实】【的】【又】【一】【方】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【 】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【:】【提】【炼】【典】【型】【材】【料】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【真】【实】【生】【活】【,】【就】【没】【有】【文】【章】【的】【源】【泉】【。】【没】【有】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【,】【文】【章】【就】【失】【去】【了】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【,】【是】【谓】【“】【无】【假】【文】【章】【少】【”】【。】【“】【假】【”】【,】【不】【是】【选】【材】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【假】【”】【,】【而】【是】【艺】【术】【上】【的】【“】【虚】【构】【”】【,】【即】【在】【真】【实】【生】【活】【的】【基】【础】【上】【进】【行】【技】【巧】【性】【的】【加】【工】【,】【如】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【、】【修】【饰】【语】【言】【等】【。】【它】【摒】【弃】【作】【文】【中】【对】【生】【活】【原】【封】【不】【动】【的】【反】【映】【,】【力】【求】【化】【实】【为】【虚】【、】【由】【虚】【而】【实】【、】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【。】【一】【堆】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【,】【本】【无】【多】【少】【美】【感】【,】【很】【有】【可】【能】【成】【为】【扫】【除】【的】【对】【象】【,】【但】【在】【画】【家】【笔】【下】【,】【却】【是】【一】【幅】【绝】【美】【的】【天】【然】【图】【画】【。】【这】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【是】【画】【家】【心】【之】【感】【悟】【,】【是】【一】【种】【艺】【术】【的】【真】【实】【。】【由】【“】【乱】【石】【荒】【草】【”】【到】【“】【图】【画】【”】【,】【有】【一】【个】【提】【炼】【加】【工】【的】【过】【程】【,】【这】【个】【过】【程】【就】【是】【由】【“】【真】【”】【到】【“】【假】【”】【、】【由】【“】【生】【活】【真】【实】【”】【到】【“】【艺】【术】【真】【实】【”】【。】【同】【样】【,】【作】【家】【在】【选】【材】【中】【也】【常】【循】【此】【规】【律】【,】【小】【到】【一】【句】【话】【,】【大】【至】【一】【个】【人】【物】【,】【都】【要】【作】【艺】【术】【处】【理】【,】【进】【行】【必】【要】【的】【“】【包】【装】【”】【。】【鲁】【迅】【先】【生】【在】【《】【阿】【Q】【正】【传】【》】【中】【,】【把】【现】【实】【生】【活】【里】【许】【多】【人】【相】【类】【似】【的】【性】【格】【浓】【缩】【并】【加】【以】【夸】【张】【,】【集】【中】【于】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【身】【上】【,】【尽】【管】【阿】【Q】【这】【个】【人】【物】【在】【现】【实】【生】【活】【中】【是】【没】【有】【的】【,】【但】【他】【的】【性】【格】【却】【能】【在】【许】【多】【人】【身】【上】【找】【出】【来】【。】【这】【个】【放】【大】【的】【、】【包】【装】【了】【的】【阿】【Q】【性】【格】【,】【更】【典】【型】【、】【更】【集】【中】【地】【反】【映】【了】【人】【物】【的】【本】【质】【特】【征】【,】【从】【而】【成】【为】【文】【学】【史】【上】【的】【不】【朽】【形】【象】【。】【这】【里】【要】【告】【诉】【同】【学】【们】【,】【在】【作】【文】【中】【,】【无】【论】【是】【写】【人】【、】【叙】【事】【,】【还】【是】【状】【物】【,】【很】【需】【要】【豁】【达】【一】【点】【、】【变】【通】【一】【点】【、】【灵】【巧】【一】【点】【,】【既】【尊】【重】【生】【活】【又】【不】【拘】【泥】【于】【生】【活】【原】【色】【,】【方】【能】【使】【文】【章】【达】【到】【反】【映】【生】【活】【、】【服】【务】【生】【活】【并】【高】【于】【生】【活】【的】【目】【的】【。】【这】【样】【的】【文】【章】【,】【才】【更】【富】【有】【积】【极】【感】【人】【的】【魅】【力】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【新】【颖】【性】【策】【略】【:】【体】【现】【选】【材】【的】【“】【效】【”】【度】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【,】【就】【是】【别】【人】【没】【有】【发】【现】【使】【用】【过】【的】【材】【料】【,】【抑】【或】【别】【人】【写】【过】【却】【还】【能】【从】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【的】【材】【料】【。】【材】【料】【新】【颖】【生】【动】【,】【写】【起】【来】【才】【能】【留】【有】【回】【味】【,】【读】【起】【来】【才】【能】【生】【动】【活】【泼】【。】【这】【样】【来】【选】【材】【,】【必】【能】【使】【作】【文】【产】【生】【令】【人】【耳】【目】【一】【新】【之】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【学】【生】【在】【选】【材】【过】【程】【中】【常】【有】【这】【样】【的】【困】【惑】【:】【自】【己】【与】【其】【他】【同】【学】【生】【活】【、】【处】【境】【没】【什】【么】【大】【差】【别】【,】【日】【子】【平】【淡】【得】【近】【乎】【于】【单】【调】【,】【能】【有】【什】【么】【新】【颖】【的】【素】【材】【呢】【?】【写】【同】【窗】【总】【难】【忘】【“】【半】【块】【橡】【皮】【”】【,】【写】【父】【母】【总】【牵】【扯】【到】【“】【一】【把】【雨】【伞】【”】【,】【写】【爱】【心】【总】【离】【不】【开】【“】【希】【望】【工】【程】【”】【。】【诸】【如】【此】【类】【,】【把】【生】【活】【生】【硬】【分】【割】【,】【使】【人】【读】【之】【生】【厌】【。】【特】【别】【是】【写】【老】【师】【,】【一】【些】【同】【学】【的】【习】【作】【在】【选】【材】【上】【常】【犯】【“】【公】【式】【化】【”】【的】【毛】【病】【,】【一】【般】【都】【写】【老】【师】【有】【一】【头】【被】【粉】【笔】【染】【白】【的】【头】【发】【,】【刻】【苦】【钻】【研】【的】【精】【神】【,】【辛】【勤】【备】【课】【、】【上】【课】【,】【认】【真】【批】【改】【作】【业】【,】【个】【别】【辅】【导】【,】【等】【等】【。】【不】【仅】【如】【此】【,】【许】【多】【学】【生】【的】【老】【师】【都】【有】【一】【个】【惊】【人】【的】【特】【点】【:】【爱】【生】【病】【。】【好】【像】【学】【生】【特】【别】【喜】【欢】【老】【师】【生】【病】【,】【如】【果】【老】【师】【不】【生】【病】【便】【没】【有】【题】【材】【可】【写】【了】【。】【这】【样】【写】【出】【来】【的】【老】【师】【千】【篇】【一】【律】【、】【千】【人】【一】【面】【,】【没】【有】【个】【性】【,】【使】【文】【章】【失】【去】【了】【生】【命】【力】【。】【出】【现】【这】【种】【情】【况】【的】【原】【因】【,】【在】【于】【同】【学】【们】【对】【老】【师】【缺】【乏】【深】【入】【细】【致】【的】【了】【解】【,】【缺】【少】【师】【生】【间】【的】【个】【性】【情】【缘】【,】【由】【于】【“】【眼】【中】【无】【师】【”】【和】【“】【胸】【中】【无】【师】【”】【,】【自】【然】【不】【会】【有】【“】【手】【中】【之】【师】【”】【,】【只】【好】【按】【头】【脑】【中】【固】【有】【的】【“】【老】【师】【模】【式】【”】【凭】【空】【编】【造】【故】【事】【。】【不】【错】【,】【老】【师】【有】【老】【师】【的】【共】【性】【,】【他】【们】【为】【人】【师】【表】【、】【呕】【心】【沥】【血】【、】【对】【学】【生】【关】【怀】【备】【至】【,】【但】【他】【们】【又】【有】【个】【性】【:】【有】【的】【老】【师】【温】【和】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【严】【谨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【朋】【友】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【是】【长】【者】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【似】【一】【缕】【春】【风】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【一】【丝】【秋】【雨】【;】【有】【的】【老】【师】【像】【热】【情】【的】【路】【标】【,】【有】【的】【老】【师】【如】【冷】【峻】【的】【航】【灯】【…】【…】【凡】【此】【种】【种】【,】【都】【是】【写】【作】【的】【极】【好】【素】【材】【,】【很】【可】【惜】【,】【这】【些】【个】【性】【化】【的】【老】【师】【,】【我】【们】【很】【多】【同】【学】【却】【没】【能】【留】【心】【。】【怎】【样】【才】【能】【在】【作】【文】【中】【写】【出】【新】【意】【,】【别】【具】【一】【格】【呢】【?】【用】【自】【己】【的】【慧】【眼】【去】【发】【现】【吧】【。】【其】【实】【生】【活】【中】【的】【美】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【的】【。】【有】【位】【学】【生】【独】【辟】【蹊】【径】【,】【从】【喜】【、】【怒】【、】【哀】【、】【乐】【四】【方】【面】【选】【取】【了】【四】【件】【事】【,】【展】【示】【了】【一】【位】【老】【师】【献】【身】【教】【育】【事】【业】【的】【精】【神】【风】【貌】【。】【这】【位】【老】【师】【为】【学】【生】【的】【主】【动】【改】【错】【而】【高】【兴】【,】【为】【发】【现】【学】【生】【晨】【练】【掉】【队】【而】【生】【气】【,】【为】【自】【己】【未】【能】【为】【老】【父】【送】【终】【而】【伤】【怀】【,】【为】【参】【加】【学】【生】【的】【毕】【业】【典】【礼】【而】【快】【乐】【。】【独】【特】【新】【颖】【的】【四】【件】【事】【,】【生】【动】【地】【描】【绘】【出】【这】【位】【老】【师】【的】【形】【象】【,】【从】【而】【开】【辟】【了】【选】【材】【的】【新】【天】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【新】【颖】【的】【材】【料】【并】【不】【仅】【指】【那】【些】【新】【奇】【、】【新】【潮】【的】【事】【。】【选】【材】【新】【颖】【,】【不】【是】【要】【学】【生】【脱】【离】【生】【活】【,】【恰】【恰】【是】【要】【他】【们】【对】【生】【活】【予】【以】【观】【照】【,】【用】【心】【体】【会】【生】【活】【。】【大】【凡】【从】【生】【活】【环】【境】【中】【选】【取】【的】【具】【有】【个】【性】【特】【点】【的】【材】【料】【都】【是】【新】【颖】【的】【,】【这】【些】【材】【料】【必】【须】【是】【从】【学】【生】【的】【心】【灵】【里】【歌】【唱】【出】【来】【的】【。】【我】【们】【的】【家】【庭】【生】【活】【、】【学】【校】【生】【活】【、】【社】【会】【生】【活】【是】【那】【么】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【,】【只】【要】【学】【生】【能】【留】【心】【体】【验】【,】【笔】【触】【何】【愁】【不】【开】【阔】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【期】【待】【着】【中】【学】【生】【在】【作】【文】【中】【能】【自】【觉】【地】【遵】【循】【选】【材】【的】【可】【信】【度】【、】【准】【确】【度】【和】【有】【效】【度】【,】【能】【艺】【术】【地】【构】【建】【好】【自】【己】【的】【选】【材】【策】【略】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】疾病专题【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【十】【五】【个】【春】【夏】【秋】【冬】【,】【我】【笑】【过】【哭】【过】【也】【痛】【过】【,】【却】【总】【怀】【着】【笃】【定】【不】【移】【的】【心】【一】【路】【向】【前】【。】【我】【成】【长】【中】【的】【每】【一】【个】【脚】【印】【,】【无】【不】【浸】【着】【坚】【持】【的】【汗】【水】【,】【它】【们】【追】【随】【在】【我】【的】【身】【后】【,】【折】【射】【出】【耀】【眼】【的】【光】【芒】【,】【见】【证】【我】【每】【一】【次】【的】【蜕】【变】【。】【坚】【持】【,】【让】【我】【从】【年】【幼】【无】【知】【的】【小】【鬼】【变】【为】【睿】【智】【好】【学】【的】【少】【年】【;】【坚】【持】【,】【让】【我】【从】【调】【皮】【捣】【蛋】【的】【“】【坏】【孩】【子】【”】【变】【为】【成】【绩】【优】【异】【的】【三】【好】【学】【生】【;】【坚】【持】【,】【让】【我】【从】【跌】【倒】【了】【无】【数】【次】【的】【失】【败】【者】【成】【为】【夺】【取】【成】【功】【的】【幸】【运】【儿】【。】【是】【的】【,】【坚】【持】【让】【我】【成】【长】【,】【没】【有】【它】【,】【也】【就】【没】【有】【现】【在】【的】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【小】【学】【起】【,】【我】【就】【是】【一】【个】【“】【体】【育】【白】【痴】【”】【。】【人】【家】【是】【“】【四】【肢】【发】【达】【,】【头】【脑】【简】【单】【”】【,】【而】【我】【却】【正】【好】【相】【反】【,】【学】【习】【成】【绩】【名】【列】【前】【茅】【,】【但】【体】【育】【却】【经】【常】【亮】【起】【红】【灯】【。】【不】【知】【是】【先】【天】【性】【身】【体】【素】【质】【差】【,】【还】【是】【后】【天】【锻】【炼】【过】【少】【,】【我】【连】【一】【个】【俯】【卧】【撑】【都】【做】【不】【标】【准】【。】【因】【此】【,】【我】【常】【常】【被】【老】【师】【当】【做】【教】【育】【同】【学】【的】【“】【反】【面】【教】【材】【”】【。】【但】【那】【一】【次】【,】【我】【没】【有】【再】【像】【往】【常】【那】【样】【畏】【缩】【,】【而】【是】【选】【择】【了】【努】【力】【坚】【持】【下】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【天】【体】【育】【课】【,】【刚】【刚】【跑】【完】【十】【五】【圈】【,】【老】【师】【便】【又】【要】【求】【我】【们】【伸】【开】【五】【指】【,】【双】【手】【撑】【地】【做】【二】【十】【个】【俯】【卧】【撑】【。】【站】【在】【队】【伍】【里】【的】【我】【,】【此】【时】【已】【是】【面】【红】【耳】【赤】【,】【大】【汗】【淋】【漓】【,】【连】【气】【都】【喘】【不】【过】【来】【。】【喉】【咙】【里】【是】【一】【阵】【阵】【干】【涩】【的】【疼】【,】【仿】【佛】【有】【火】【在】【燃】【烧】【。】【看】【着】【同】【学】【们】【一】【个】【个】【都】【撑】【在】【了】【地】【上】【,】【我】【迟】【疑】【着】【要】【不】【要】【请】【假】【休】【息】【,】【可】【身】【体】【里】【好】【像】【有】【个】【声】【音】【在】【叫】【喊】【:】【“】【不】【!】【你】【不】【能】【这】【么】【懦】【弱】【,】【二】【十】【个】【俯】【卧】【撑】【能】【累】【死】【你】【吗】【?】【!】【”】【可】【是】【,】【我】【…】【…】【管】【不】【了】【那】【么】【多】【了】【,】【硬】【着】【头】【皮】【也】【要】【做】【。】【我】【两】【手】【撑】【地】【,】【咬】【紧】【牙】【关】【,】【俯】【下】【身】【去】【,】【用】【尽】【全】【力】【,】【一】【个】【,】【两】【个】【…】【…】【十】【二】【个】【…】【…】【哎】【呀】【,】【不】【好】【,】【我】【全】【身】【都】【冒】【冷】【汗】【了】【,】【感】【觉】【身】【体】【软】【塌】【塌】【的】【,】【仿】【佛】【连】【呼】【吸】【都】【困】【难】【了】【。】【终】【于】【双】【手】【一】【软】【,】【瘫】【倒】【在】【地】【上】【。】【周】【围】【的】【同】【学】【一】【下】【子】【哄】【笑】【起】【来】【,】【我】【可】【顾】【不】【了】【这】【些】【,】【既】【然】【是】【自】【己】【认】【定】【要】【做】【的】【,】【就】【一】【定】【要】【坚】【持】【做】【到】【。】【我】【深】【深】【地】【吸】【了】【口】【气】【,】【拍】【拍】【手】【上】【的】【沙】【粒】【,】【重】【新】【做】【了】【起】【来】【,】【“】【一】【个】【,】【两】【个】【…】【…】【十】【九】【个】【…】【…】【二】【十】【个】【!】【”】【我】【心】【里】【一】【边】【数】【着】【数】【,】【一】【边】【不】【停】【地】【鼓】【励】【自】【己】【:】【“】【坚】【持】【!】【坚】【持】【!】【坚】【持】【就】【是】【胜】【利】【!】【”】【那】【一】【刹】【那】【,】【我】【感】【觉】【用】【尽】【了】【自】【己】【的】【全】【部】【力】【气】【,】【我】【终】【于】【做】【完】【了】【二】【十】【个】【。】【“】【呵】【呵】【,】【沈】【彦】【终】【于】【成】【功】【了】【!】【”】【同】【学】【们】【在】【为】【我】【的】【成】【功】【鼓】【掌】【欢】【呼】【!】【我】【无】【力】【地】【笑】【了】【笑】【,】【但】【却】【是】【发】【自】【内】【心】【的】【。】【是】【因】【为】【坚】【持】【到】【了】【终】【点】【,】【才】【会】【从】【心】【底】【绽】【放】【出】【真】【正】【喜】【悦】【的】【花】【朵】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【后】【,】【我】【整】【整】【休】【息】【了】【两】【天】【,】【才】【能】【像】【往】【常】【那】【样】【活】【动】【自】【如】【。】【虽】【然】【手】【臂】【还】【是】【酸】【酸】【的】【,】【但】【我】【认】【为】【我】【做】【得】【很】【对】【,】【这】【次】【经】【历】【不】【仅】【让】【我】【的】【体】【育】【成】【绩】【有】【了】【提】【高】【,】【更】【重】【要】【的】【是】【让】【我】【尝】【到】【了】【成】【功】【的】【甜】【蜜】【,】【它】【促】【使】【我】【更】【加】【勇】【敢】【地】【走】【下】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【知】【道】【坚】【持】【不】【是】【一】【天】【两】【天】【的】【事】【情】【,】【而】【是】【一】【辈】【子】【的】【功】【课】【。】【在】【漫】【漫】【人】【生】【路】【上】【,】【也】【许】【我】【还】【会】【遇】【到】【许】【多】【未】【知】【的】【挫】【折】【,】【那】【将】【比】【做】【二】【十】【个】【俯】【卧】【撑】【要】【困】【难】【得】【多】【,】【但】【是】【我】【相】【信】【,】【我】【们】【只】【要】【坚】【持】【不】【懈】【地】【奋】【斗】【,】【就】【能】【排】【除】【万】【难】【,】【走】【向】【成】【功】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【i】【m】【g】【 】【s】【r】【c】【=】【"】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【i】【m】【g】【1】【.】【q】【i】【k】【a】【n】【.】【c】【o】【m】【.】【c】【n】【/】【q】【k】【i】【m】【a】【g】【e】【s】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【1】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【1】【0】【5】【-】【1】【-】【l】【.】【j】【p】【g】【"】【 】【a】【l】【t】【=】【"】【h】【t】【t】【p】【:】【/】【/】【i】【m】【g】【1】【.】【q】【i】【k】【a】【n】【.】【c】【o】【m】【.】【c】【n】【/】【q】【k】【i】【m】【a】【g】【e】【s】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【1】【/】【y】【x】【z】【w】【2】【0】【1】【4】【1】【1】【0】【5】【-】【1】【-】【l】【.】【j】【p】【g】【"】【 】【/】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【李】【白】【,】【字】【太】【白】【,】【号】【青】【莲】【居】【士】【,】【唐】【代】【诗】【人】【,】【被】【誉】【为】【“】【诗】【仙】【”】【。】【生】【性】【浪】【漫】【旷】【达】【,】【豪】【放】【不】【羁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【李】【白】【的】【许】【多】【诗】【都】【充】【分】【表】【现】【了】【他】【非】【凡】【的】【抱】【负】【,】【及】【奔】【放】【的】【热】【情】【。】【他】【希】【望】【有】【“】【大】【鹏】【一】【日】【同】【风】【起】【,】【扶】【摇】【直】【上】【九】【万】【里】【”】【之】【日】【,】【也】【曾】【被】【朝】【廷】【召】【去】【供】【奉】【翰】【林】【,】【但】【因】【反】【权】【贵】【和】【腐】【败】【,】【而】【遭】【受】【排】【挤】【。】【《】【行】【路】【难】【》】【这】【首】【诗】【就】【是】【他】【遭】【受】【谗】【毁】【后】【,】【在】【被】【贬】【长】【安】【的】【途】【中】【所】【写】【的】【。】【全】【诗】【表】【达】【了】【他】【勇】【于】【向】【命】【运】【挑】【战】【,】【不】【屈】【服】【,】【乐】【观】【向】【上】【的】【人】【生】【态】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【行】【路】【难】【,】【行】【路】【难】【,】【多】【歧】【路】【,】【今】【安】【在】【?】【”】【但】【当】【他】【的】【思】【路】【回】【到】【眼】【前】【现】【实】【中】【来】【的】【时】【候】【,】【再】【一】【次】【感】【到】【了】【人】【生】【道】【路】【的】【艰】【难】【。】【离】【筵】【上】【瞻】【望】【前】【程】【,】【只】【觉】【前】【路】【崎】【岖】【,】【歧】【途】【甚】【多】【,】【要】【走】【的】【路】【,】【究】【竟】【在】【哪】【里】【呢】【?】【这】【是】【感】【情】【在】【尖】【锐】【复】【杂】【的】【矛】【盾】【中】【再】【一】【次】【回】【旋】【。】【但】【是】【倔】【强】【而】【又】【自】【信】【的】【李】【白】【,】【绝】【不】【愿】【在】【离】【筵】【上】【表】【现】【自】【己】【的】【气】【馁】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【长】【风】【破】【浪】【会】【有】【时】【,】【直】【挂】【云】【帆】【济】【沧】【海】【!】【”】【他】【那】【种】【积】【极】【为】【世】【所】【用】【的】【强】【烈】【要】【求】【,】【终】【于】【使】【他】【再】【次】【摆】【脱】【了】【歧】【路】【彷】【徨】【的】【苦】【闷】【,】【唱】【出】【了】【充】【满】【信】【心】【与】【展】【望】【的】【强】【音】【。】【“】【长】【风】【破】【浪】【”】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【强】【烈】【的】【政】【治】【抱】【负】【,】【虽】【被】【贬】【谪】【,】【但】【他】【的】【报】【国】【之】【志】【并】【没】【有】【消】【退】【,】【他】【希】【望】【有】【“】【长】【风】【破】【浪】【”】【之】【日】【。】【这】【更】【表】【明】【了】【他】【旷】【达】【豪】【放】【,】【积】【极】【的】【人】【生】【态】【度】【。】【虽】【屡】【受】【挫】【折】【,】【却】【难】【抵】【内】【心】【的】【悲】【愤】【,】【他】【仍】【以】【乐】【观】【向】【上】【、】【积】【极】【进】【取】【的】【态】【度】【激】【励】【自】【己】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【含】【蓄】【的】【语】【言】【,】【昂】【扬】【的】【斗】【志】【。】【好】【一】【个】【“】【长】【风】【破】【浪】【会】【有】【时】【,】【直】【挂】【云】【帆】【济】【沧】【海】【”】【。】【让】【人】【读】【起】【来】【有】【身】【临】【其】【境】【的】【感】【觉】【,】【很】【能】【引】【起】【读】【者】【的】【共】【鸣】【,】【从】【而】【达】【到】【激】【励】【人】【心】【的】【效】【果】【,】【鞭】【策】【了】【很】【多】【失】【意】【之】【人】【的】【奋】【进】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【形】【形】【色】【色】【的】【古】【诗】【表】【达】【了】【诗】【人】【们】【的】【不】【同】【情】【愿】【,】【只】【要】【留】【心】【品】【味】【就】【能】【读】【出】【他】【们】【的】【魅】【力】【,】【更】【能】【体】【会】【到】【他】【们】【成】【功】【背】【后】【的】【艰】【辛】【。】疾病专题【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【名】【文】【引】【路】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【蒲】【公】【英】【也】【很】【快】【乐】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朱】【成】【玉】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【后】【部】【落】【是】【出】【了】【名】【的】【贫】【穷】【偏】【僻】【,】【而】【我】【即】【将】【要】【被】【分】【配】【到】【那】【里】【去】【做】【小】【学】【老】【师】【,】【想】【想】【这】【个】【心】【就】【凉】【了】【半】【截】【儿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【的】【那】【天】【阳】【光】【明】【媚】【,】【路】【边】【一】【大】【片】【一】【大】【片】【的】【蒲】【公】【英】【开】【着】【黄】【灿】【灿】【的】【花】【朵】【。】【尽】【管】【心】【情】【沉】【重】【,】【但】【路】【边】【的】【风】【景】【还】【是】【给】【了】【我】【一】【丝】【安】【慰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【算】【走】【到】【村】【子】【了】【,】【眼】【里】【看】【到】【的】【都】【是】【低】【矮】【破】【旧】【的】【房】【子】【,】【鼻】【子】【闻】【到】【的】【都】【是】【火】【烧】【粪】【便】【的】【味】【道】【,】【偶】【尔】【传】【来】【几】【声】【犬】【吠】【,】【算】【是】【给】【这】【个】【死】【寂】【的】【世】【界】【敲】【敲】【门】【提】【了】【个】【醒】【儿】【:】【我】【们】【还】【活】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【一】【派】【萧】【条】【荒】【凉】【的】【景】【象】【让】【我】【顿】【时】【傻】【了】【眼】【,】【我】【在】【心】【里】【暗】【暗】【发】【誓】【:】【哪】【怕】【动】【用】【所】【有】【关】【系】【,】【也】【要】【逃】【离】【这】【个】【苦】【海】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【问】【了】【一】【个】【小】【姑】【娘】【学】【校】【的】【位】【置】【,】【她】【先】【是】【愣】【了】【一】【下】【,】【然】【后】【放】【下】【手】【里】【的】【猪】【食】【桶】【,】【在】【裤】【子】【上】【抹】【了】【抹】【手】【,】【说】【她】【领】【着】【我】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【个】【大】【概】【有】【十】【来】【岁】【的】【孩】【子】【吧】【,】【扎】【着】【两】【个】【活】【泼】【的】【小】【辫】【子】【,】【脏】【兮】【兮】【的】【小】【脸】【上】【缀】【满】【了】【灿】【烂】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【一】【双】【大】【眼】【睛】【写】【满】【了】【好】【奇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【欢】【快】【地】【走】【在】【我】【的】【前】【边】【,】【热】【情】【地】【问】【我】【为】【什】【么】【来】【这】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【嗫】【嚅】【着】【说】【:】【“】【哦】【,】【没】【啥】【事】【,】【就】【想】【到】【处】【走】【走】【看】【看】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哦】【。】【”】【不】【知】【道】【为】【什】【么】【她】【忽】【然】【间】【显】【得】【有】【些】【失】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【学】【校】【了】【。】【与】【其】【说】【那】【是】【学】【校】【,】【不】【如】【干】【脆】【说】【就】【是】【一】【间】【稍】【微】【大】【一】【点】【的】【房】【子】【和】【一】【个】【稍】【微】【大】【一】【点】【的】【可】【以】【勉】【强】【当】【操】【场】【的】【院】【子】【,】【一】【个】【旗】【杆】【和】【一】【面】【有】【些】【破】【旧】【的】【红】【旗】【证】【明】【着】【这】【里】【的】【与】【众】【不】【同】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【教】【室】【的】【黑】【板】【擦】【得】【干】【干】【净】【净】【的】【,】【坐】【椅】【也】【都】【很】【整】【齐】【地】【摆】【放】【着】【,】【窗】【户】【也】【都】【纤】【尘】【不】【染】【,】【但】【就】【是】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【问】【她】【怎】【么】【没】【人】【上】【课】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【没】【有】【老】【师】【啊】【,】【大】【概】【有】【两】【个】【月】【了】【,】【老】【师】【们】【一】【个】【个】【的】【来】【了】【又】【走】【了】【,】【大】【人】【们】【说】【,】【没】【人】【愿】【意】【来】【我】【们】【这】【里】【当】【老】【师】【。】【”】【小】【姑】【娘】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【这】【里】【怎】【么】【会】【这】【么】【干】【净】【呢】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【和】【我】【那】【几】【个】【好】【朋】【友】【说】【好】【了】【的】【,】【每】【天】【都】【要】【有】【一】【个】【人】【负】【责】【来】【这】【里】【打】【扫】【卫】【生】【,】【我】【们】【要】【把】【这】【里】【拾】【掇】【得】【干】【干】【净】【净】【的】【,】【这】【样】【老】【师】【来】【了】【,】【就】【不】【会】【嫌】【弃】【这】【里】【脏】【,】【就】【会】【留】【下】【来】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【孩】【子】【的】【话】【,】【好】【似】【在】【我】【心】【头】【猛】【地】【扎】【了】【一】【针】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【她】【拿】【着】【一】【块】【抹】【布】【,】【开】【始】【忙】【碌】【起】【来】【。】【那】【小】【小】【的】【身】【影】【,】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【闪】【着】【动】【人】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【我】【从】【背】【包】【里】【拿】【出】【一】【瓶】【冰】【红】【茶】【递】【给】【她】【,】【她】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【地】【接】【过】【来】【,】【轻】【轻】【呷】【了】【一】【小】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【好】【喝】【,】【”】【她】【轻】【声】【说】【道】【,】【随】【即】【又】【抿】【了】【一】【小】【口】【,】【然】【后】【赶】【紧】【盖】【上】【了】【盖】【子】【递】【还】【给】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【说】【那】【是】【给】【你】【的】【。】【她】【高】【兴】【得】【忘】【了】【说】【谢】【谢】【,】【只】【说】【,】【“】【那】【我】【要】【带】【回】【家】【给】【妈】【妈】【和】【弟】【弟】【也】【尝】【一】【尝】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【学】【校】【回】【来】【,】【小】【姑】【娘】【在】【路】【边】【蹲】【了】【下】【去】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【折】【下】【一】【朵】【蒲】【公】【英】【递】【给】【我】【,】【她】【说】【:】【“】【吹】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【时】【候】【,】【先】【许】【一】【个】【愿】【望】【。】【然】【后】【一】【口】【气】【吹】【下】【去】【,】【要】【把】【蒲】【公】【英】【吹】【得】【一】【个】【不】【剩】【,】【愿】【望】【就】【会】【实】【现】【的】【。】【”】【我】【看】【她】【自】【己】【也】【折】【了】【一】【朵】【,】【然】【后】【很】【虔】【诚】【地】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【把】【蒲】【公】【英】【缓】【缓】【地】【送】【到】【自】【己】【的】【唇】【边】【,】【然】【后】【“】【呼】【”】【地】【一】【下】【吹】【散】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【也】【吹】【啊】【,】【快】【,】【赶】【紧】【许】【个】【愿】【望】【。】【”】【她】【催】【促】【着】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【在】【心】【里】【默】【念】【了】【很】【久】【,】【然】【后】【真】【的】【就】【很】【认】【真】【地】【一】【口】【气】【吹】【过】【去】【,】【那】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【种】【子】【漫】【天】【飞】【舞】【,】【像】【轻】【盈】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【霎】【时】【间】【丝】【丝】【缕】【缕】【荡】【漾】【开】【去】【。】【小】【姑】【娘】【灿】【烂】【地】【笑】【着】【,】【好】【像】【每】【个】【人】【许】【下】【的】【愿】【望】【,】【都】【可】【以】【实】【现】【一】【样】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【愿】【望】【就】【是】【希】【望】【这】【里】【的】【每】【个】【孩】【子】【都】【能】【像】【她】【一】【样】【快】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【姑】【娘】【把】【我】【送】【出】【很】【远】【,】【一】【直】【到】【我】【坐】【上】【了】【通】【往】【县】【城】【的】【客】【车】【。】【我】【向】【她】【挥】【手】【,】【大】【声】【地】【向】【她】【喊】【道】【:】【“】【明】【天】【,】【学】【校】【见】【,】【不】【见】【不】【散】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【摘】【自】【《】【青】【春】【岁】【月】【》】【,】【2】【0】【1】【2】【年】【第】【6】【期】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赏】【 】【析】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【雪】【花】【一】【般】【美】【丽】【的】【蒲】【公】【英】【,】【小】【姑】【娘】【渴】【望】【读】【书】【的】【眼】【神】【,】【驱】【散】【了】【“】【我】【”】【心】【头】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【让】【“】【我】【”】【在】【艰】【苦】【的】【环】【境】【中】【重】【新】【找】【回】【了】【快】【乐】【,】【找】【到】【了】【自】【己】【的】【人】【生】【价】【值】【。】【小】【说】【以】【蒲】【公】【英】【为】【线】【索】【,】【推】【动】【了】【故】【事】【情】【节】【的】【发】【展】【。】【作】【者】【多】【次】【对】【蒲】【公】【英】【进】【行】【了】【生】【动】【的】【描】【写】【,】【如】【“】【去】【的】【那】【天】【阳】【光】【明】【媚】【,】【路】【边】【一】【大】【片】【一】【大】【片】【的】【蒲】【公】【英】【开】【着】【黄】【灿】【灿】【的】【花】【朵】【”】【,】【以】【乐】【景】【写】【哀】【情】【,】【反】【衬】【出】【“】【我】【”】【心】【情】【的】【沉】【重】【。】【“】【眼】【里】【看】【到】【的】【都】【是】【低】【矮】【破】【旧】【的】【房】【子】【,】【鼻】【子】【闻】【到】【的】【都】【是】【火】【烧】【粪】【便】【的】【味】【道】【,】【偶】【尔】【传】【来】【几】【声】【犬】【吠】【”】【,】【则】【直】【接】【渲】【染】【了】【村】【子】【的】【萧】【条】【荒】【凉】【的】【气】【氛】【。】【“】【那】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【种】【子】【漫】【天】【飞】【舞】【,】【像】【轻】【盈】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【霎】【时】【间】【丝】【丝】【缕】【缕】【荡】【漾】【开】【去】【”】【,】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【的】【手】【法】【,】【描】【写】【了】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【美】【丽】【,】【表】【达】【了】【小】【姑】【娘】【的】【美】【好】【愿】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【仿】【 】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【咀】【嚼】【大】【自】【然】【的】【滋】【味】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【杨】【思】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【自】【然】【是】【神】【奇】【的】【,】【一】【山】【一】【水】【,】【一】【草】【一】【木】【,】【无】【不】【充】【满】【智】【慧】【,】【深】【蕴】【哲】【理】【,】【富】【有】【灵】【性】【。】【这】【不】【,】【一】【棵】【不】【知】【名】【的】【小】【树】【,】【让】【我】【领】【悟】【出】【了】【人】【生】【的】【哲】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【时】【,】【天】【空】【中】【一】【层】【层】【乌】【云】【越】【压】【越】【低】【,】【一】【片】【灰】【暗】【。】【狂】【风】【卷】【起】【地】【上】【的】【沙】【尘】【,】【肆】【虐】【地】【扬】【起】【,】【弥】【漫】【在】【空】【中】【。】【顷】【刻】【,】【豆】【大】【的】【雨】【点】【砸】【落】【在】【地】【面】【上】【,】【也】【砸】【在】【我】【本】【就】【沉】【重】【的】【心】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【,】【目】【光】【呆】【滞】【。】【那】【颗】【久】【经】【分】【数】【打】【磨】【的】【心】【,】【本】【应】【该】【是】【麻】【木】【了】【,】【但】【依】【然】【很】【重】【,】【很】【痛】【。】【我】【知】【道】【这】【是】【为】【什】【么】【,】【昨】【天】【,】【竞】【赛】【成】【绩】【出】【来】【了】【,】【而】【我】【,】【虽】【然】【日】【夜】【为】【之】【奋】【斗】【、】【努】【力】【,】【到】【头】【来】【还】【是】【…】【…】【我】【的】【心】【冷】【极】【了】【,】【也】【乱】【极】【了】【,】【正】【如】【这】【风】【雨】【交】【加】【的】【天】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【,】【风】【依】【旧】【呼】【啸】【,】【雨】【依】【旧】【肆】【虐】【。】【风】【夹】【着】【雨】【点】【透】【过】【窗】【户】【,】【打】【在】【我】【脸】【上】【,】【好】【冷】【。】【院】【子】【里】【草】【地】【上】【的】【棵】【棵】【杂】【草】【,】【此】【刻】【正】【伏】【在】【风】【雨】【的】【脚】【下】【,】【卑】【躬】【屈】【膝】【,】【不】【敢】【抬】【头】【。】【我】【该】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【难】【道】【就】【像】【眼】【前】【的】【杂】【草】【一】【样】【,】【倒】【在】【风】【雨】【的】【肆】【虐】【中】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【猛】【地】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【草】【地】【旁】【边】【的】【那】【棵】【不】【知】【名】【的】【小】【树】【,】【正】【努】【力】【地】【挺】【直】【腰】【杆】【,】【与】【风】【雨】【搏】【击】【。】【虽】【然】【,】【狂】【风】【不】【时】【地】【将】【它】【打】【倒】【在】【地】【,】【它】【那】【稀】【疏】【的】【叶】【子】【在】【风】【雨】【中】【摇】【摆】【着】【,】【瑟】【缩】【着】【,】【但】【它】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【挺】【直】【了】【腰】【杆】【,】【顽】【强】【地】【抗】【击】【着】【风】【雨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【里】【懊】【恼】【极】【了】【:】【你】【也】【在】【嘲】【笑】【我】【的】【懦】【弱】【和】【无】【能】【吗】【?】【我】【走】【出】【去】【,】【捡】【起】【一】【块】【石】【头】【,】【朝】【那】【棵】【小】【树】【扔】【去】【。】【哈】【!】【击】【中】【了】【!】【小】【树】【东】【倒】【西】【歪】【,】【身】【上】【的】【雨】【滴】【滑】【落】【,】【但】【它】【似】【乎】【更】【加】【轻】【松】【了】【,】【再】【次】【昂】【首】【挺】【胸】【,】【如】【一】【柄】【利】【刃】【直】【刺】【天】【空】【。】【风】【,】【更】【大】【了】【;】【雨】【,】【更】【猛】【了】【。】【而】【小】【树】【依】【然】【面】【无】【惧】【色】【,】【屹】【立】【在】【狂】【风】【暴】【雨】【之】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【震】【撼】【了】【,】【突】【然】【间】【,】【似】【乎】【悟】【出】【了】【什】【么】【:】【这】【一】【个】【个】【雨】【点】【,】【不】【也】【是】【我】【们】【人】【生】【篇】【章】【中】【的】【那】【一】【个】【个】【逗】【号】【吗】【?】【走】【自】【己】【的】【路】【吧】【!】【尽】【管】【前】【面】【风】【雨】【交】【加】【,】【路】【途】【坎】【坷】【,】【也】【要】【勇】【敢】【搏】【击】【,】【永】【不】【言】【弃】【。】【不】【要】【总】【和】【别】【人】【比】【,】【只】【要】【付】【出】【了】【,】【努】【力】【了】【,】【活】【着】【也】【就】【值】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【停】【了】【,】【雨】【住】【了】【,】【一】【缕】【缕】【阳】【光】【透】【过】【乌】【云】【,】【洒】【落】【在】【小】【树】【的】【身】【上】【。】【小】【树】【笑】【了】【,】【满】【脸】【的】【骄】【傲】【与】【自】【豪】【。】【小】【树】【并】【不】【高】【大】【,】【也】【说】【不】【上】【秀】【美】【。】【然】【而】【,】【它】【勇】【敢】【地】【搏】【击】【风】【雨】【的】【场】【面】【,】【难】【道】【说】【不】【是】【一】【幅】【绝】【美】【的】【风】【景】【画】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【紧】【扣】【题】【意】【,】【选】【取】【了】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【极】【其】【常】【见】【的】【场】【景】【,】【以】【散】【文】【的】【笔】【法】【,】【对】【小】【树】【搏】【击】【风】【雨】【进】【行】【了】【生】【动】【而】【又】【细】【腻】【的】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【把】【小】【树】【拟】【人】【化】【,】【是】【本】【文】【最】【大】【的】【亮】【点】【。】【“】【但】【它】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【挺】【直】【了】【腰】【杆】【,】【顽】【强】【地】【抗】【击】【着】【风】【雨】【”】【“】【而】【小】【树】【依】【然】【面】【无】【惧】【色】【,】【屹】【立】【在】【狂】【风】【暴】【雨】【之】【中】【”】【 】【“】【小】【树】【笑】【了】【,】【满】【脸】【的】【骄】【傲】【与】【自】【豪】【”】【等】【语】【句】【,】【生】【动】【地】【表】【现】【了】【小】【树】【不】【畏】【艰】【险】【、】【奋】【力】【拼】【搏】【的】【精】【神】【品】【质】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【以】【景】【衬】【情】【,】【情】【景】【交】【融】【。】【文】【章】【开】【头】【,】【作】【者】【描】【写】【下】【雨】【前】【天】【空】【的】【阴】【暗】【压】【抑】【,】【有】【力】【地】【烘】【托】【了】【人】【物】【心】【情】【的】【沉】【重】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【①】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【坐】【落】【在】【苏】【北】【古】【镇】【梁】【垛】【2】【0】【国】【道】【与】【她】【擦】【肩】【而】【过】【,】【②】【川】【流】【不】【息】【的】【车】【辆】【带】【来】【了】【众】【多】【的】【信】【息】【与】【商】【品】【,】【带】【来】【了】【家】【乡】【日】【新】【月】【异】【的】【变】【化】【。】【串】【场】【河】【像】【一】【条】【绿】【色】【的】【丝】【绸】【,】【缓】【缓】【地】【向】【北】【飘】【去】【,】【养】【育】【着】【这】【一】【方】【朴】【实】【勤】【劳】【的】【水】【乡】【儿】【女】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【③】【这】【里】【虽】【然】【没】【有】【名】【人】【故】【居】【美】【丽】【传】【说】【,】【也】【没】【有】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【、】【高】【山】【大】【川】【。】【但】【她】【却】【是】【一】【朵】【刚】【绽】【开】【的】【花】【蕾】【,】【以】【其】【独】【特】【的】【④】【丰】【姿】【给】【人】【美】【的】【享】【受】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【啊】【,】【朋】【友】【,】【请】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【吧】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑤】【秋】【天】【,】【是】【家】【乡】【最】【热】【闹】【的】【季】【节】【。】【欢】【乐】【的】【田】【野】【上】【到】【处】【是】【翠】【玉】【镶】【金】【。】【那】【洁】【白】【的】【棉】【絮】【会】【把】【你】【团】【团】【围】【住】【,】【让】【你】【置】【身】【于】【白】【云】【中】【,】【一】【时】【竟】【不】【知】【高】【低】【,】【不】【辨】【东】【西】【。】【远】【处】【,】【一】【望】【无】【际】【的】【金】【黄】【色】【的】【稻】【子】【在】【微】【风】【中】【向】【你】【频】【频】【招】【手】【,】【急】【不】【可】【耐】【地】【叫】【着】【:】【“】【熟】【了】【!】【熟】【了】【!】【”】【⑥】【月】【光】【下】【热】【情】【好】【客】【的】【家】【乡】【人】【会】【拉】【着】【你】【的】【手】【谈】【天】【说】【地】【。】【那】【时】【候】【,】【他】【们】【会】【忘】【记】【一】【天】【的】【疲】【劳】【掰】【着】【手】【指】【头】【告】【诉】【你】【,】【谁】【家】【的】【小】【伙】【子】【出】【门】【半】【年】【就】【成】【了】【小】【老】【板】【,】【谁】【家】【的】【姑】【娘】【足】【不】【出】【户】【却】【是】【名】【闻】【遐】【迩】【的】【养】【蚕】【好】【手】【。】【他】【们】【仿】【佛】【有】【说】【不】【尽】【的】【新】【鲜】【事】【,】【⑦】【道】【不】【完】【的】【幸】【福】【水】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【⑧】【伴】【随】【着】【春】【天】【的】【脚】【步】【,】【展】【现】【你】【眼】【前】【的】【又】【是】【另】【一】【番】【景】【象】【。】【⑨】【黑】【土】【地】【立】【刻】【换】【上】【了】【一】【身】【绿】【装】【。】【金】【灿】【灿】【的】【油】【菜】【花】【⑩】【装】【满】【了】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【,】【惹】【来】【了】【一】【大】【群】【的】【蜜】【蜂】【、】【蝴】【蝶】【。】【绿】【油】【油】【的】【麦】【子】【也】【俯】【首】【微】【笑】【仿】【佛】【预】【示】【着】【又】【是】【一】【个】【丰】【收】【年】【。】【【】【1】【1】【】】【人】【们】【的】【欢】【歌】【笑】【语】【、】【机】【器】【的】【轰】【鸣】【声】【奏】【起】【了】【最】【动】【听】【的】【“】【闹】【三】【春】【”】【交】【响】【乐】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【你】【知】【道】【吗】【,】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【一】【起】【捕】【鱼】【,】【这】【可】【是】【一】【件】【乐】【事】【。】【串】【场】【河】【以】【及】【大】【大】【小】【小】【的】【鱼】【塘】【是】【【】【1】【2】【】】【取】【之】【不】【尽】【的】【渔】【场】【。】【不】【必】【说】【柳】【下】【垂】【钓】【趣】【,】【烟】【雨】【透】【蓑】【衣】【,】【也】【不】【必】【说】【白】【帆】【映】【碧】【水】【,】【渔】【歌】【唱】【晚】【霞】【,】【单】【是】【冬】【季】【破】【冰】【捕】【鱼】【就】【可】【以】【让】【你】【乐】【而】【忘】【返】【了】【。】【请】【看】【吧】【,】【【】【1】【3】【】】【一】【网】【收】【到】【净】【是】【鱼】【,】【大】【的】【四】【五】【斤】【,】【小】【的】【也】【有】【二】【三】【斤】【,】【有】【时】【还】【能】【网】【到】【几】【只】【冬】【季】【罕】【见】【的】【大】【螃】【蟹】【。】【于】【是】【晚】【上】【便】【有】【鲜】【鱼】【肥】【蟹】【下】【饭】【了】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【【】【1】【4】【】】【朋】【友】【,】【如】【果】【说】【祖】【国】【是】【一】【座】【大】【花】【园】【,】【那】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【就】【是】【一】【朵】【带】【露】【的】【玫】【瑰】【沐】【浴】【着】【党】【的】【雨】【露】【阳】【光】【,】【开】【得】【更】【加】【绚】【丽】【多】【彩】【。】【2】【0】【年】【,】【我】【们】【镇】【纳】【税】【超】【亿】【元】【,】【跻】【身】【于】【苏】【北】【小】【康】【示】【范】【镇】【的】【行】【列】【。】【如】【今】【家】【乡】【人】【又】【在】【奏】【起】【时】【代】【的】【最】【强】【音】【加】【强】【精】【神】【文】【明】【建】【设】【,】【争】【取】【早】【日】【跨】【入】【省】【文】【明】【镇】【的】【先】【进】【行】【列】【。】【祝】【愿】【家】【乡】【骑】【上】【时】【代】【的】【骏】【马】【奔】【驰】【吧】【!】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【朋】【友】【,】【请】【到】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【来】【吧】【!】【这】【里】【物】【阜】【民】【丰】【,】【景】【美】【,】【人】【更】【美】【。】【你】【来】【了】【,】【保】【证】【你】【看】【不】【够】【,】【观】【不】【尽】【,】【梦】【里】【再】【重】【游】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【1】【●】【点】【评】【:】【读】【罢】【这】【篇】【习】【作】【,】【感】【到】【有】【一】【种】【【】【1】【5】【】】【浓】【郁】【的】【乡】【土】【气】【息】【,】【清】【新】【而】【自】【然】【加】【之】【文】【题】【上】【一】【个】【“】【请】【”】【字】【,】【倍】【觉】【作】【者】【对】【家】【乡】【小】【镇】【的】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【。】【作】【者】【【】【1】【6】【】】【观】【察】【细】【致】【,】【反】【映】【家】【乡】【风】【貌】【,】【抓】【住】【了】【特】【色】【。】【既】【撷】【取】【了】【春】【、】【秋】【两】【季】【苏】【北】【水】【乡】【的】【不】【同】【的】【场】【景】【来】【写】【,】【又】【描】【写】【了】【冬】【季】【捕】【鱼】【这】【一】【令】【人】【乐】【而】【忘】【返】【的】【【】【1】【7】【】】【场】【面】【;】【既】【是】【一】【幅】【风】【景】【画】【、】【【】【1】【8】【】】【风】【俗】【画】【,】【又】【处】【处】【突】【出】【了】【家】【乡】【人】【的】【力】【量】【和】【精】【神】【,】【提】【升】【了】【文】【章】【的】【内】【涵】【▲】【另】【外】【,】【语】【言】【也】【形】【象】【生】【动】【,】【富】【有】【诗】【意】【一】【是】【综】【合】【运】【用】【了】【拟】【人】【、】【比】【喻】【等】【多】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【,】【增】【添】【了】【文】【章】【的】【美】【感】【;】【二】【是】【善】【翻】【古】【人】【意】【,】【如】【“】【柳】【下】【垂】【钓】【趣】【,】【烟】【雨】【透】【蓑】【衣】【”】【“】【白】【帆】【映】【碧】【水】【,】【渔】【歌】【唱】【晚】【霞】【”】【读】【来】【更】【具】【【】【1】【9】【】】【艺】【术】【感】【染】【力】【;】【三】【是】【长】【句】【与】【短】【句】【、】【整】【句】【与】【散】【句】【的】【结】【合】【,】【使】【行】【文】【活】【泼】【、】【自】【由】【。】【这】【些】【都】【足】【见】【小】【作】【者】【【】【2】【0】【】】【在】【炼】【字】【炼】【句】【上】【下】【了】【工】【夫】【。】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【1】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【①】【“】【坐】【落】【”】【一】【词】【是】【多】【余】【的】【。】【第】【一】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【苏】【北】【古】【镇】【梁】【垛】【是】【我】【的】【家】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【②】【“】【信】【息】【”】【用】【“】【众】【多】【”】【来】【形】【容】【欠】【妥】【。】【“】【商】【品】【”】【既】【有】【带】【来】【的】【,】【也】【有】【运】【出】【的】【。】【画】【线】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【便】【捷】【的】【交】【通】【促】【进】【了】【经】【济】【的】【繁】【荣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【③】【此】【处】【可】【改】【为】【:】【这】【里】【虽】【然】【没】【有】【名】【胜】【古】【迹】【、】【美】【丽】【传】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【④】【“】【丰】【姿】【”】【改】【为】【“】【风】【姿】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑤】【画】【线】【句】【对】【全】【段】【有】【引】【领】【的】【作】【用】【,】【但】【“】【热】【闹】【”】【似】【不】【如】【“】【繁】【忙】【”】【来】【得】【贴】【切】【。】【“】【翠】【玉】【镶】【金】【”】【用】【得】【也】【欠】【妥】【,】【因】【为】【棉】【田】【和】【稻】【田】【之】【间】【不】【存】【在】【“】【镶】【”】【和】【被】【“】【镶】【”】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑥】【为】【什】【么】【一】【定】【要】【在】【月】【光】【下】【呢】【?】【完】【全】【可】【以】【没】【有】【这】【个】【时】【间】【限】【制】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑦】【画】【线】【句】【不】【通】【,】【只】【要】【把】【“】【水】【”】【改】【成】【“】【感】【”】【即】【可】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑧】【此】【句】【最】【好】【改】【为】【:】【春】【天】【,】【是】【家】【乡】【最】【美】【丽】【的】【季】【节】【。】【这】【样】【就】【可】【与】【前】【一】【段】【相】【呼】【应】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑨】【苏】【北】【的】【土】【地】【并】【非】【是】【黑】【色】【的】【,】【不】【要】【硬】【搬】【现】【成】【的】【词】【语】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【⑩】【用】【词】【生】【硬】【,】【—】【—】【你】【的】【眼】【睛】【能】【“】【装】【”】【得】【下】【吗】【?】【画】【线】【句】【删】【去】【反】【而】【和】【下】【文】【接】【得】【更】【紧】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【1】【】】【画】【线】【句】【为】【套】【话】【。】【记】【住】【,】【这】【是】【广】【阔】【的】【田】【野】【,】【如】【果】【是】【在】【建】【筑】【工】【地】【或】【工】【厂】【的】【厂】【房】【里】【,】【则】【还】【有】【可】【能】【。】【删】【掉】【也】【不】【影】【响】【文】【中】【的】【表】【达】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【2】【】】【天】【下】【并】【没】【有】【“】【取】【之】【不】【尽】【的】【渔】【场】【”】【,】【赞】【美】【家】【乡】【,】【也】【不】【可】【有】【夸】【大】【之】【词】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【3】【】】【画】【线】【句】【可】【改】【为】【:】【网】【网】【打】【起】【的】【都】【是】【活】【蹦】【乱】【跳】【的】【肥】【鱼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【4】【】】【这】【一】【段】【的】【首】【句】【是】【套】【话】【,】【改】【为】【:】【家】【乡】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【更】【是】【迅】【速】【。】【这】【样】【和】【下】【文】【联】【系】【就】【紧】【密】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【5】【】】【“】【点】【评】【”】【写】【得】【尚】【可】【,】【但】【仍】【有】【可】【商】【榷】【之】【处】【。】【“】【浓】【郁】【”】【二】【字】【还】【谈】【不】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【6】【】】【从】【文】【中】【看】【不】【出】【作】【者】【有】【细】【致】【的】【观】【察】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【7】【】】【本】【文】【并】【无】【场】【面】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【8】【】】【“】【风】【俗】【画】【”】【无】【从】【谈】【起】【,】【“】【处】【处】【突】【出】【”】【则】【有】【过】【誉】【之】【嫌】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【▲】【本】【文】【语】【言】【有】【优】【点】【,】【但】【问】【题】【似】【更】【多】【些】【。】【讲】【优】【点】【,】【也】【需】【恰】【如】【其】【分】【才】【是】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【1】【9】【】】【“】【艺】【术】【感】【染】【力】【”】【这】【样】【的】【词】【语】【一】【般】【不】【能】【用】【来】【评】【价】【学】【生】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【【】【2】【0】【】】【现】【在】【能】【在】【“】【炼】【字】【炼】【句】【上】【下】【工】【夫】【”】【的】【学】【生】【恐】【怕】【是】【少】【而】【又】【少】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】疾病专题【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【名】【文】【引】【路】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【蒲】【公】【英】【也】【很】【快】【乐】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朱】【成】【玉】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【后】【部】【落】【是】【出】【了】【名】【的】【贫】【穷】【偏】【僻】【,】【而】【我】【即】【将】【要】【被】【分】【配】【到】【那】【里】【去】【做】【小】【学】【老】【师】【,】【想】【想】【这】【个】【心】【就】【凉】【了】【半】【截】【儿】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【去】【的】【那】【天】【阳】【光】【明】【媚】【,】【路】【边】【一】【大】【片】【一】【大】【片】【的】【蒲】【公】【英】【开】【着】【黄】【灿】【灿】【的】【花】【朵】【。】【尽】【管】【心】【情】【沉】【重】【,】【但】【路】【边】【的】【风】【景】【还】【是】【给】【了】【我】【一】【丝】【安】【慰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【总】【算】【走】【到】【村】【子】【了】【,】【眼】【里】【看】【到】【的】【都】【是】【低】【矮】【破】【旧】【的】【房】【子】【,】【鼻】【子】【闻】【到】【的】【都】【是】【火】【烧】【粪】【便】【的】【味】【道】【,】【偶】【尔】【传】【来】【几】【声】【犬】【吠】【,】【算】【是】【给】【这】【个】【死】【寂】【的】【世】【界】【敲】【敲】【门】【提】【了】【个】【醒】【儿】【:】【我】【们】【还】【活】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【一】【派】【萧】【条】【荒】【凉】【的】【景】【象】【让】【我】【顿】【时】【傻】【了】【眼】【,】【我】【在】【心】【里】【暗】【暗】【发】【誓】【:】【哪】【怕】【动】【用】【所】【有】【关】【系】【,】【也】【要】【逃】【离】【这】【个】【苦】【海】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【问】【了】【一】【个】【小】【姑】【娘】【学】【校】【的】【位】【置】【,】【她】【先】【是】【愣】【了】【一】【下】【,】【然】【后】【放】【下】【手】【里】【的】【猪】【食】【桶】【,】【在】【裤】【子】【上】【抹】【了】【抹】【手】【,】【说】【她】【领】【着】【我】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【个】【大】【概】【有】【十】【来】【岁】【的】【孩】【子】【吧】【,】【扎】【着】【两】【个】【活】【泼】【的】【小】【辫】【子】【,】【脏】【兮】【兮】【的】【小】【脸】【上】【缀】【满】【了】【灿】【烂】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【一】【双】【大】【眼】【睛】【写】【满】【了】【好】【奇】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【欢】【快】【地】【走】【在】【我】【的】【前】【边】【,】【热】【情】【地】【问】【我】【为】【什】【么】【来】【这】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【嗫】【嚅】【着】【说】【:】【“】【哦】【,】【没】【啥】【事】【,】【就】【想】【到】【处】【走】【走】【看】【看】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哦】【。】【”】【不】【知】【道】【为】【什】【么】【她】【忽】【然】【间】【显】【得】【有】【些】【失】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【学】【校】【了】【。】【与】【其】【说】【那】【是】【学】【校】【,】【不】【如】【干】【脆】【说】【就】【是】【一】【间】【稍】【微】【大】【一】【点】【的】【房】【子】【和】【一】【个】【稍】【微】【大】【一】【点】【的】【可】【以】【勉】【强】【当】【操】【场】【的】【院】【子】【,】【一】【个】【旗】【杆】【和】【一】【面】【有】【些】【破】【旧】【的】【红】【旗】【证】【明】【着】【这】【里】【的】【与】【众】【不】【同】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【教】【室】【的】【黑】【板】【擦】【得】【干】【干】【净】【净】【的】【,】【坐】【椅】【也】【都】【很】【整】【齐】【地】【摆】【放】【着】【,】【窗】【户】【也】【都】【纤】【尘】【不】【染】【,】【但】【就】【是】【没】【有】【一】【个】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【问】【她】【怎】【么】【没】【人】【上】【课】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【没】【有】【老】【师】【啊】【,】【大】【概】【有】【两】【个】【月】【了】【,】【老】【师】【们】【一】【个】【个】【的】【来】【了】【又】【走】【了】【,】【大】【人】【们】【说】【,】【没】【人】【愿】【意】【来】【我】【们】【这】【里】【当】【老】【师】【。】【”】【小】【姑】【娘】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【那】【这】【里】【怎】【么】【会】【这】【么】【干】【净】【呢】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【我】【和】【我】【那】【几】【个】【好】【朋】【友】【说】【好】【了】【的】【,】【每】【天】【都】【要】【有】【一】【个】【人】【负】【责】【来】【这】【里】【打】【扫】【卫】【生】【,】【我】【们】【要】【把】【这】【里】【拾】【掇】【得】【干】【干】【净】【净】【的】【,】【这】【样】【老】【师】【来】【了】【,】【就】【不】【会】【嫌】【弃】【这】【里】【脏】【,】【就】【会】【留】【下】【来】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【孩】【子】【的】【话】【,】【好】【似】【在】【我】【心】【头】【猛】【地】【扎】【了】【一】【针】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【她】【拿】【着】【一】【块】【抹】【布】【,】【开】【始】【忙】【碌】【起】【来】【。】【那】【小】【小】【的】【身】【影】【,】【在】【阳】【光】【下】【闪】【着】【动】【人】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【我】【从】【背】【包】【里】【拿】【出】【一】【瓶】【冰】【红】【茶】【递】【给】【她】【,】【她】【有】【些】【犹】【豫】【地】【接】【过】【来】【,】【轻】【轻】【呷】【了】【一】【小】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【好】【喝】【,】【”】【她】【轻】【声】【说】【道】【,】【随】【即】【又】【抿】【了】【一】【小】【口】【,】【然】【后】【赶】【紧】【盖】【上】【了】【盖】【子】【递】【还】【给】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【说】【那】【是】【给】【你】【的】【。】【她】【高】【兴】【得】【忘】【了】【说】【谢】【谢】【,】【只】【说】【,】【“】【那】【我】【要】【带】【回】【家】【给】【妈】【妈】【和】【弟】【弟】【也】【尝】【一】【尝】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【从】【学】【校】【回】【来】【,】【小】【姑】【娘】【在】【路】【边】【蹲】【了】【下】【去】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【折】【下】【一】【朵】【蒲】【公】【英】【递】【给】【我】【,】【她】【说】【:】【“】【吹】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【时】【候】【,】【先】【许】【一】【个】【愿】【望】【。】【然】【后】【一】【口】【气】【吹】【下】【去】【,】【要】【把】【蒲】【公】【英】【吹】【得】【一】【个】【不】【剩】【,】【愿】【望】【就】【会】【实】【现】【的】【。】【”】【我】【看】【她】【自】【己】【也】【折】【了】【一】【朵】【,】【然】【后】【很】【虔】【诚】【地】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【把】【蒲】【公】【英】【缓】【缓】【地】【送】【到】【自】【己】【的】【唇】【边】【,】【然】【后】【“】【呼】【”】【地】【一】【下】【吹】【散】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【也】【吹】【啊】【,】【快】【,】【赶】【紧】【许】【个】【愿】【望】【。】【”】【她】【催】【促】【着】【我】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【在】【心】【里】【默】【念】【了】【很】【久】【,】【然】【后】【真】【的】【就】【很】【认】【真】【地】【一】【口】【气】【吹】【过】【去】【,】【那】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【种】【子】【漫】【天】【飞】【舞】【,】【像】【轻】【盈】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【霎】【时】【间】【丝】【丝】【缕】【缕】【荡】【漾】【开】【去】【。】【小】【姑】【娘】【灿】【烂】【地】【笑】【着】【,】【好】【像】【每】【个】【人】【许】【下】【的】【愿】【望】【,】【都】【可】【以】【实】【现】【一】【样】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【的】【愿】【望】【就】【是】【希】【望】【这】【里】【的】【每】【个】【孩】【子】【都】【能】【像】【她】【一】【样】【快】【乐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【姑】【娘】【把】【我】【送】【出】【很】【远】【,】【一】【直】【到】【我】【坐】【上】【了】【通】【往】【县】【城】【的】【客】【车】【。】【我】【向】【她】【挥】【手】【,】【大】【声】【地】【向】【她】【喊】【道】【:】【“】【明】【天】【,】【学】【校】【见】【,】【不】【见】【不】【散】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【摘】【自】【《】【青】【春】【岁】【月】【》】【,】【2】【0】【1】【2】【年】【第】【6】【期】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【赏】【 】【析】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【雪】【花】【一】【般】【美】【丽】【的】【蒲】【公】【英】【,】【小】【姑】【娘】【渴】【望】【读】【书】【的】【眼】【神】【,】【驱】【散】【了】【“】【我】【”】【心】【头】【的】【烦】【恼】【,】【让】【“】【我】【”】【在】【艰】【苦】【的】【环】【境】【中】【重】【新】【找】【回】【了】【快】【乐】【,】【找】【到】【了】【自】【己】【的】【人】【生】【价】【值】【。】【小】【说】【以】【蒲】【公】【英】【为】【线】【索】【,】【推】【动】【了】【故】【事】【情】【节】【的】【发】【展】【。】【作】【者】【多】【次】【对】【蒲】【公】【英】【进】【行】【了】【生】【动】【的】【描】【写】【,】【如】【“】【去】【的】【那】【天】【阳】【光】【明】【媚】【,】【路】【边】【一】【大】【片】【一】【大】【片】【的】【蒲】【公】【英】【开】【着】【黄】【灿】【灿】【的】【花】【朵】【”】【,】【以】【乐】【景】【写】【哀】【情】【,】【反】【衬】【出】【“】【我】【”】【心】【情】【的】【沉】【重】【。】【“】【眼】【里】【看】【到】【的】【都】【是】【低】【矮】【破】【旧】【的】【房】【子】【,】【鼻】【子】【闻】【到】【的】【都】【是】【火】【烧】【粪】【便】【的】【味】【道】【,】【偶】【尔】【传】【来】【几】【声】【犬】【吠】【”】【,】【则】【直】【接】【渲】【染】【了】【村】【子】【的】【萧】【条】【荒】【凉】【的】【气】【氛】【。】【“】【那】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【种】【子】【漫】【天】【飞】【舞】【,】【像】【轻】【盈】【的】【雪】【花】【,】【霎】【时】【间】【丝】【丝】【缕】【缕】【荡】【漾】【开】【去】【”】【,】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【的】【手】【法】【,】【描】【写】【了】【蒲】【公】【英】【的】【美】【丽】【,】【表】【达】【了】【小】【姑】【娘】【的】【美】【好】【愿】【望】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【仿】【 】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【咀】【嚼】【大】【自】【然】【的】【滋】【味】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【杨】【思】【文】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【自】【然】【是】【神】【奇】【的】【,】【一】【山】【一】【水】【,】【一】【草】【一】【木】【,】【无】【不】【充】【满】【智】【慧】【,】【深】【蕴】【哲】【理】【,】【富】【有】【灵】【性】【。】【这】【不】【,】【一】【棵】【不】【知】【名】【的】【小】【树】【,】【让】【我】【领】【悟】【出】【了】【人】【生】【的】【哲】【理】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【时】【,】【天】【空】【中】【一】【层】【层】【乌】【云】【越】【压】【越】【低】【,】【一】【片】【灰】【暗】【。】【狂】【风】【卷】【起】【地】【上】【的】【沙】【尘】【,】【肆】【虐】【地】【扬】【起】【,】【弥】【漫】【在】【空】【中】【。】【顷】【刻】【,】【豆】【大】【的】【雨】【点】【砸】【落】【在】【地】【面】【上】【,】【也】【砸】【在】【我】【本】【就】【沉】【重】【的】【心】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【,】【目】【光】【呆】【滞】【。】【那】【颗】【久】【经】【分】【数】【打】【磨】【的】【心】【,】【本】【应】【该】【是】【麻】【木】【了】【,】【但】【依】【然】【很】【重】【,】【很】【痛】【。】【我】【知】【道】【这】【是】【为】【什】【么】【,】【昨】【天】【,】【竞】【赛】【成】【绩】【出】【来】【了】【,】【而】【我】【,】【虽】【然】【日】【夜】【为】【之】【奋】【斗】【、】【努】【力】【,】【到】【头】【来】【还】【是】【…】【…】【我】【的】【心】【冷】【极】【了】【,】【也】【乱】【极】【了】【,】【正】【如】【这】【风】【雨】【交】【加】【的】【天】【气】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【,】【风】【依】【旧】【呼】【啸】【,】【雨】【依】【旧】【肆】【虐】【。】【风】【夹】【着】【雨】【点】【透】【过】【窗】【户】【,】【打】【在】【我】【脸】【上】【,】【好】【冷】【。】【院】【子】【里】【草】【地】【上】【的】【棵】【棵】【杂】【草】【,】【此】【刻】【正】【伏】【在】【风】【雨】【的】【脚】【下】【,】【卑】【躬】【屈】【膝】【,】【不】【敢】【抬】【头】【。】【我】【该】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【难】【道】【就】【像】【眼】【前】【的】【杂】【草】【一】【样】【,】【倒】【在】【风】【雨】【的】【肆】【虐】【中】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【猛】【地】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【草】【地】【旁】【边】【的】【那】【棵】【不】【知】【名】【的】【小】【树】【,】【正】【努】【力】【地】【挺】【直】【腰】【杆】【,】【与】【风】【雨】【搏】【击】【。】【虽】【然】【,】【狂】【风】【不】【时】【地】【将】【它】【打】【倒】【在】【地】【,】【它】【那】【稀】【疏】【的】【叶】【子】【在】【风】【雨】【中】【摇】【摆】【着】【,】【瑟】【缩】【着】【,】【但】【它】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【挺】【直】【了】【腰】【杆】【,】【顽】【强】【地】【抗】【击】【着】【风】【雨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【心】【里】【懊】【恼】【极】【了】【:】【你】【也】【在】【嘲】【笑】【我】【的】【懦】【弱】【和】【无】【能】【吗】【?】【我】【走】【出】【去】【,】【捡】【起】【一】【块】【石】【头】【,】【朝】【那】【棵】【小】【树】【扔】【去】【。】【哈】【!】【击】【中】【了】【!】【小】【树】【东】【倒】【西】【歪】【,】【身】【上】【的】【雨】【滴】【滑】【落】【,】【但】【它】【似】【乎】【更】【加】【轻】【松】【了】【,】【再】【次】【昂】【首】【挺】【胸】【,】【如】【一】【柄】【利】【刃】【直】【刺】【天】【空】【。】【风】【,】【更】【大】【了】【;】【雨】【,】【更】【猛】【了】【。】【而】【小】【树】【依】【然】【面】【无】【惧】【色】【,】【屹】【立】【在】【狂】【风】【暴】【雨】【之】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【震】【撼】【了】【,】【突】【然】【间】【,】【似】【乎】【悟】【出】【了】【什】【么】【:】【这】【一】【个】【个】【雨】【点】【,】【不】【也】【是】【我】【们】【人】【生】【篇】【章】【中】【的】【那】【一】【个】【个】【逗】【号】【吗】【?】【走】【自】【己】【的】【路】【吧】【!】【尽】【管】【前】【面】【风】【雨】【交】【加】【,】【路】【途】【坎】【坷】【,】【也】【要】【勇】【敢】【搏】【击】【,】【永】【不】【言】【弃】【。】【不】【要】【总】【和】【别】【人】【比】【,】【只】【要】【付】【出】【了】【,】【努】【力】【了】【,】【活】【着】【也】【就】【值】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【风】【停】【了】【,】【雨】【住】【了】【,】【一】【缕】【缕】【阳】【光】【透】【过】【乌】【云】【,】【洒】【落】【在】【小】【树】【的】【身】【上】【。】【小】【树】【笑】【了】【,】【满】【脸】【的】【骄】【傲】【与】【自】【豪】【。】【小】【树】【并】【不】【高】【大】【,】【也】【说】【不】【上】【秀】【美】【。】【然】【而】【,】【它】【勇】【敢】【地】【搏】【击】【风】【雨】【的】【场】【面】【,】【难】【道】【说】【不】【是】【一】【幅】【绝】【美】【的】【风】【景】【画】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【紧】【扣】【题】【意】【,】【选】【取】【了】【日】【常】【生】【活】【中】【极】【其】【常】【见】【的】【场】【景】【,】【以】【散】【文】【的】【笔】【法】【,】【对】【小】【树】【搏】【击】【风】【雨】【进】【行】【了】【生】【动】【而】【又】【细】【腻】【的】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【把】【小】【树】【拟】【人】【化】【,】【是】【本】【文】【最】【大】【的】【亮】【点】【。】【“】【但】【它】【一】【次】【又】【一】【次】【地】【挺】【直】【了】【腰】【杆】【,】【顽】【强】【地】【抗】【击】【着】【风】【雨】【”】【“】【而】【小】【树】【依】【然】【面】【无】【惧】【色】【,】【屹】【立】【在】【狂】【风】【暴】【雨】【之】【中】【”】【 】【“】【小】【树】【笑】【了】【,】【满】【脸】【的】【骄】【傲】【与】【自】【豪】【”】【等】【语】【句】【,】【生】【动】【地】【表】【现】【了】【小】【树】【不】【畏】【艰】【险】【、】【奋】【力】【拼】【搏】【的】【精】【神】【品】【质】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【以】【景】【衬】【情】【,】【情】【景】【交】【融】【。】【文】【章】【开】【头】【,】【作】【者】【描】【写】【下】【雨】【前】【天】【空】【的】【阴】【暗】【压】【抑】【,】【有】【力】【地】【烘】【托】【了】【人】【物】【心】【情】【的】【沉】【重】【。】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【雨】【来】【得】【这】【么】【急】【,】【这】【么】【绵】【长】【,】【已】【经】【下】【一】【天】【了】【,】【到】【了】【晚】【上】【,】【雨】【更】【大】【了】【。】【但】【我】【还】【是】【和】【同】【学】【趁】【着】【课】【间】【休】【息】【的】【当】【儿】【,】【冒】【雨】【冲】【进】【学】【校】【旁】【的】【商】【店】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【在】【商】【店】【里】【转】【了】【一】【圈】【儿】【,】【最】【后】【我】【把】【目】【光】【锁】【定】【在】【一】【个】【娃】【娃】【的】【身】【上】【,】【就】【是】【它】【了】【。】【“】【这】【个】【娃】【娃】【多】【少】【钱】【?】【”】【“】【两】【块】【。】【”】【卖】【货】【的】【叔】【叔】【说】【。】【“】【买】【了】【!】【”】【我】【“】【豪】【爽】【”】【地】【付】【完】【钱】【和】【同】【学】【跑】【回】【了】【学】【校】【赶】【上】【晚】【自】【习】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【回】【到】【学】【校】【,】【老】【师】【宣】【布】【因】【为】【停】【电】【晚】【自】【习】【不】【上】【了】【,】【听】【到】【这】【个】【消】【息】【,】【我】【高】【兴】【极】【了】【,】【因】【为】【这】【正】【是】【我】【渴】【求】【的】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【把】【娃】【娃】【包】【裹】【严】【实】【,】【放】【进】【了】【书】【包】【,】【然】【后】【骑】【上】【自】【行】【车】【便】【在】【雨】【中】【飞】【奔】【…】【…】【一】【进】【门】【,】【我】【连】【头】【发】【都】【没】【顾】【上】【擦】【,】【急】【忙】【跑】【进】【屋】【里】【。】【此】【时】【,】【妹】【妹】【正】【聚】【精】【会】【神】【地】【看】【着】【动】【画】【片】【,】【一】【看】【我】【跑】【进】【来】【,】【惊】【喜】【地】【喊】【着】【:】【“】【姐】【姐】【回】【来】【了】【!】【”】【我】【对】【妹】【妹】【神】【秘】【地】【一】【笑】【:】【“】【看】【!】【姐】【姐】【给】【你】【买】【什】【么】【了】【…】【…】【”】【边】【说】【边】【从】【书】【包】【里】【拿】【出】【了】【那】【个】【娃】【娃】【。】【“】【祝】【你】【生】【日】【快】【乐】【!】【”】【妹】【妹】【兴】【奋】【地】【蹦】【了】【起】【来】【:】【“】【哇】【!】【是】【个】【娃】【娃】【啊】【!】【”】【便】【赶】【紧】【把】【娃】【娃】【接】【过】【去】【,】【还】【没】【忘】【眯】【着】【小】【眼】【睛】【亲】【了】【我】【一】【口】【,】【那】【一】【刻】【我】【真】【的】【感】【觉】【好】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【我】【8】【岁】【那】【年】【,】【妈】【妈】【生】【下】【了】【妹】【妹】【,】【在】【没】【生】【她】【之】【前】【,】【我】【是】【父】【母】【的】【掌】【中】【宝】【儿】【,】【时】【时】【刻】【刻】【都】【被】【他】【们】【牵】【挂】【着】【。】【他】【们】【关】【心】【我】【的】【生】【活】【、】【关】【注】【我】【的】【学】【习】【,】【给】【我】【过】【生】【日】【、】【买】【礼】【物】【。】【自】【从】【有】【了】【妹】【妹】【,】【我】【在】【享】【受】【牵】【挂】【的】【同】【时】【自】【己】【也】【多】【了】【份】【牵】【挂】【,】【那】【就】【是】【我】【对】【妹】【妹】【的】【牵】【挂】【。】【当】【我】【要】【买】【东】【西】【时】【,】【我】【会】【想】【着】【妹】【妹】【,】【我】【会】【想】【着】【也】【给】【妹】【妹】【买】【一】【份】【,】【于】【是】【我】【的】【零】【用】【钱】【就】【变】【成】【了】【妹】【妹】【的】【玩】【具】【和】【零】【食】【。】【看】【到】【妹】【妹】【吃】【得】【高】【兴】【、】【玩】【得】【开】【心】【,】【我】【会】【比】【自】【己】【吃】【、】【自】【己】【玩】【还】【开】【心】【。】【生】【活】【中】【正】【因】【为】【多】【了】【这】【份】【牵】【挂】【,】【这】【份】【牵】【挂】【也】【让】【我】【感】【到】【幸】【福】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【想】【,】【幸】【福】【是】【什】【么】【?】【幸】【福】【是】【亲】【人】【之】【间】【的】【牵】【挂】【;】【幸】【福】【是】【作】【为】【儿】【女】【对】【父】【母】【的】【责】【任】【;】【幸】【福】【是】【作】【为】【公】【民】【对】【社】【会】【的】【义】【务】【。】【有】【了】【这】【份】【牵】【挂】【,】【生】【活】【才】【变】【得】【有】【趣】【;】【有】【了】【这】【份】【责】【任】【,】【家】【庭】【才】【变】【得】【幸】【福】【;】【有】【了】【这】【份】【义】【务】【,】【社】【会】【才】【变】【得】【和】【谐】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【被】【人】【牵】【挂】【是】【幸】【福】【的】【,】【牵】【挂】【别】【人】【同】【样】【是】【幸】【福】【的】【,】【不】【是】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【抓】【住】【自】【己】【生】【活】【中】【的】【一】【件】【小】【事】【—】【—】【为】【妹】【妹】【买】【生】【日】【礼】【物】【的】【事】【,】【发】【表】【感】【想】【,】【觉】【得】【生】【活】【中】【因】【为】【有】【了】【妹】【妹】【,】【自】【己】【多】【了】【一】【份】【牵】【挂】【,】【写】【出】【了】【一】【般】【独】【生】【子】【女】【无】【法】【体】【会】【到】【的】【那】【种】【情】【感】【。】【小】【作】【者】【对】【幸】【福】【的】【理】【解】【就】【是】【这】【种】【对】【妹】【妹】【的】【牵】【挂】【。】【但】【作】【者】【并】【没】【有】【仅】【停】【留】【在】【对】【牵】【挂】【妹】【妹】【的】【描】【写】【,】【而】【是】【由】【此】【联】【系】【到】【家】【庭】【和】【社】【会】【,】【认】【为】【“】【幸】【福】【是】【作】【为】【儿】【女】【对】【父】【母】【的】【责】【任】【;】【幸】【福】【是】【作】【为】【公】【民】【对】【社】【会】【的】【义】【务】【”】【,】【从】【而】【使】【文】【章】【的】【立】【意】【得】【到】【升】【华】【。】【小】【作】【者】【的】【这】【种】【发】【现】【是】【可】【贵】【的】【,】【只】【有】【在】【生】【活】【中】【观】【察】【思】【考】【,】【用】【美】【好】【的】【情】【感】【对】【待】【生】【活】【中】【的】【事】【,】【才】【会】【有】【这】【样】【的】【体】【会】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【的】【语】【言】【朴】【实】【自】【然】【,】【如】【买】【娃】【娃】【的】【对】【话】【、】【对】【天】【气】【的】【看】【法】【、】【急】【于】【回】【家】【的】【想】【法】【、】【送】【妹】【妹】【礼】【物】【的】【语】【言】【动】【作】【等】【,】【都】【那】【么】【真】【实】【自】【然】【。】【作】【者】【的】【观】【点】【也】【是】【从】【生】【活】【中】【总】【结】【出】【来】【的】【,】【自】【然】【亲】【切】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【刘】【翠】【英】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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